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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did a very good job writing this story. I'm sure everyone would like to read your other story, too.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's a very nice ending, in my opinion. :D
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful story 10/10
Cannot wait to read more from you in the future xxxx
Cannot wait to read more from you in the future xxxx
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a classic abused woman story. My sister and her husband were the same. He belittled her, beat her, destroyed her clothes and things, accused her of wanting/having sex with other men, and kept her from family and friends. But she "loved" him and also said he was sorry and promised to be better. Everything that is in this story. The Draco in this story is just like him. Popular with other people, able to fool them that he's a "nice" guy and makes Hermione still want and love him despite his abuse. If it follows the same pattern, she'll go back to him, he'll never admit or make amends for his abuse and most likely it will continue. Lucius will encourage it and Narcissa will facilitate it. My sister is dead now from illness brought on by her husband's abuse.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great story, I hope you decide to post your other one :) your a really good writer
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! Thank you for sharing it! This was really a fun read.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh come on another chapter PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! like right now! i cant wait to see what happens now but why hasnt anyone told them what is going on yet. :) boy lucius has an evil strick not to let on.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story...you should have posted slowly and kept us hanging ;) but I very glad to have read it all. Great job!!!
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was a very sweet ending. As to the question if you should post the other story you have I say please do. You are a gifted writer and I enjoyed this story very much. I found out if you like one story by an author the others are usually as good if not better. That little rule has yet to dissapoint. I hope you do post the other and as usual well done!!!
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should post it!
I really did enjoy this story!
Well done!
I really did enjoy this story!
Well done!