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for Muggle Marriage Law 51599

by jacidavy

person anniea
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i just read the whole story in one sitting! it really got to me. i had tears and everything! just..........wow! i'm saving this one! i loved it! *kisses*
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter....fucked up that he didn't invite hermione. but it was a bunch of slytherins, but i mean it was a bunch of married couples
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow very good part. lots of angst. so sad.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM

He took in a breath. She deserved her privacy. He pulled out his wand. He walked a few feet away from her and apparated.

Alright um hun when they do that they make sound so im sure that she would
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Hermione changed into her last grey T-shirt. Her burgundy colored athletic shorts hung off her hips. She flopped down on the bed.

Is she fucking stupid? She knows draco gets pissed when she wears that color
Not sure why she took her shirt off
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think that hermione cries a little too much. lmfao.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Hermione wiped it with her thumb,
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so lovely. you should post a chap of the other fic, see if people like it!
person Terrie
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco should have daydreamed a little longer so he could remember what he did to Hermione and her dress after the ball.