rate_review Reviews

I HATE this story. I hate how weak and pathetic Hermione is, I hate that she fell in love with a rapist, wife beater Malfoy, I hate how poorly developed the characters are. I don't even know why I have continued reading it. And it's not that it's badly written, in the sense of language use. It's that story wise, I hate how you completely ruined one of the best characters in the series.

I'm glad he regretted his treatment of her. I loved it!

overall i enjoyed the story. made me have strong feelings. just felt that a few things kinda jumped around, time lines were a little confusing, like some connecting dots were missing that we as readers had to fill in for ourselves to get back on track. kinda was surprised at how NO ONE was really bringing up the fact that Draco was raping Hermione in the beginning....even Mrs. Malfoy....she always had a firm hand on Draco, i was hoping she wud have said something to him, instead of just being a quiet standby. and then Draco even bringing up the rape...didnt happen till the very end. and i get u made Hermione a forgiving person, but even she didnt acknowledge it as much as she shud have. it was Draco that ...in the end... said he hurt her. also the machine that can track dark magic....how come it didnt see Draco using an Unforgivable Curse on Hermione? on more than one occasion....

on a good note...i looved louis, and steven. funny. it was a good story, different from the traditional story. and i loved the surprise wedding in the end. and how Mr. Malfoy and Mrs. Malfoy watched over Louis. wonderful!!

take care!

It's a beautiful story! Lois is adorable! The only thing I wish is that Hermione's transition from loathing to loving Draco were a bit more flushed out. As it were, the only hints I got is her birthday gift to Draco.

I loved this story. It was sweet, sad and had the perfect ending. It is a story I have thoroughly enjoyed and I look forward to any other stories that you post. Thanks for writing this story :)

Why is he worried about Azkaban for killing her when he is using unforgivables? Can't he be reported for that also? Really looking forward to Hermione getting some power in the relationship. Very interesting. p

Is she kidding? It is not even as an abused wife would be where there were times that the abuser was nice and so they cling to it. What has happened to her? Where did she ever find the gumption to leave a teaching post to help with the war when she is so mealy mouthed? I am getting where I cannot even feel bad for her, just irritated. I am just going to hope that you give her a backbone at some point and not just make him start treating her as if she were a human being. p

You've still got me boohooing off and on with your story. Wonder how long it will take Draco to add up the dates on the baby or if it will take his mother to do it (hahaha)since we all know how perceptive men can be sometimes. I was expecting him to catch Jon almost going to the wrong (or right) room. Liking the story much better as I figured I would. Hope that Draco will apologize for how he treated her at some point. p

Poor Hermione, it was bad enough having to sign the papers once, but to have to go back and do it again when she still loves him, is torture. Excellent chapter. p

I am so thankful that I did not find this story until it was completed as I end up crying with every chapter and want to get to the happy ending without waiting it out. Excellent story. p