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for A Life Undefined

by Tiffindale

schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting and a very nice setup so far. I look forward to seeing the three of them maturing as they are sadly forced to be together. Very powerful conversation between Snape and himself. The letter to Harry was believable as was the possibility of this situation. Wonderful job. I look forward to more.
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like the beginning of this! I hope you continue it!
I'll be looking for your story in the lists!
jades
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person Argo
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My heart is aching for Harry. He certainly doesn't deserve att of this. And Draco is one childish evil little prat.
I don't see, why Harry can't be staying with Ron's family during summer. Why he didn't asked Dumbledore about possibility of him staying in the Burrow? Or in Grimmauld place, with Remus?
Also, I wonder does "Draco x Harry" meant Harry will be submissive in your story?
person SParker
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm telling you now, I felt COMPELLED to login and review...and God knows how
I dislike logging in.

It has a promising start, it will be interesting to see how these 3 intermingle
in the same residence. Who knows maybe they'll find a common ground or just
something in common, besides having the headache of dealing with a madman.

Anyway, I'll be keeping an eye out for this one.
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the idea. You kept all the characters personalities intact and i can't wait to see where you go with your story next. Please update soon!!!
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a weakness for Severitus.. its one of my guilty pleasures and a good one is published so rarely. I would love to see where you go with this.. :)
person Hine
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. LOVE IT. Can't wait for next chapter! <3
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 1!!! Why can't Harry go to the Black house?
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i'm so sad for harry. How dare snape say that to him. i could kill snape too. update soon.;)