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for A Taste of Heaven

by Breenieweenie

schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ARGHHH! Draco Malfoy is an ass! First lying, then the Ravenclaw chick? Boooooo Draco! Great follow-up chapter!
person kazfeist
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This really is looking to be interesting. I like your strong Hermione. I can't wait to find out why he dumped her. If it's just because he was scared he was falling, that's pretty lame. Can't wait for more.
person lily69
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Strong 2nd chapter! I like the story so far...nice to see something other than the "and they fell madly in love and automatically lived happily every after" routine. Can't wait to read more!
person ichiruki
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good start, it's two in the morning so I don't know what else I can say without rambling, lol, but I just had to read and review. I'm pretty curious to see how this spins out. You've definitely got my attention.


ichi- also I loved the Claiming Hermione trailer you made for ilkee!
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great start, looking forward to the next chapter =] and welcome to AFF !
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it!
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, it huuuurrrrtss! Poor Hermione, so grounded in the reality of their relationship, but heartbroken just the same! Bravo for your first time, looking forward to more from you! BTW, love, love, love the video you made for 'Claiming Hermione'! Perfect!
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great start! update soon
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is an encoraging start, I like your premise.

Is this some sort of plan, does he really not want her? Its making me think LOL, so that means I like it!

Update again soon!

~LadyVoldemort87~

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