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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was a good chapter. I see you aren't a fan of Ginny. You make her into a very good bitch. Love how Pansy isn't being friends with Ginny, and I can't wait to see the eventual blow out with Draco and Hermione!!
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Girl, if you're the same BreenieWeenie who does those fantastic trailers then I'm happy to read your work.
It's a great first chapter and my heart is breaking.
It's a great first chapter and my heart is breaking.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm - draco is strangely quiet...
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hate that she is questioning herself. Its Draco's problem not hers. Wow I can't believe he's just going through girls so quickly. DAMN! Padma's a slag by the way.
And Hermione was so brave to kiss him one last time. Proud of her.
Hermione needs a distraction by the way - a boy distraction.
Two last things: I love how well you've captured a young woman's angst of first love. And the "scenarios" were hilarious. I was cracking up.
And Hermione was so brave to kiss him one last time. Proud of her.
Hermione needs a distraction by the way - a boy distraction.
Two last things: I love how well you've captured a young woman's angst of first love. And the "scenarios" were hilarious. I was cracking up.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DAMN - that was so real. That went from HOT to FRIGID in seconds. What is going through Draco's mind?
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FUCK! I don't even know what to say....is what Ginny said true?? WTF???? My mind is blown apart.
Ok what I want to see is this story moved up past graduation and Hermione coming into her own - she may not be conventionally beautiful but she can he really sexy. I want to see Hermione with a HOT pureblood like Blaise, Theo, Marcus or Adrian. I want Draco Malfoy to eat his words and I want Ginny to be dumped and smacked by her mother.
Ok what I want to see is this story moved up past graduation and Hermione coming into her own - she may not be conventionally beautiful but she can he really sexy. I want to see Hermione with a HOT pureblood like Blaise, Theo, Marcus or Adrian. I want Draco Malfoy to eat his words and I want Ginny to be dumped and smacked by her mother.
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BW... oh man. You are the second author to make me speechless. Needless to say I can't *wait* for the next offering....
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a brilliant chapter!
I love the way you are writing in the first person, well done for making it real!
~LadyVoldemort87~
I love the way you are writing in the first person, well done for making it real!
~LadyVoldemort87~
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE this story, its brilliant! You portray the images so well, i'm really impressed! PLEASE update soon, it makes for a great distraction from my physics homework lol!
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, dearest! So angsty and so sad that he felt like she believed him incapable of love. Perhaps he wonders if she speaks the truth? Maybe he thought the same so he broke up with her.....he believed she didnt really love him, just the idea of him. I like that, I like this story and I will continue to read faithfully!
Thank you so much for your lovely praise by the way. I appreciate it more than you know. You are doing wonderfully here, keep up the good work!
Happy Writing!
SG
Thank you so much for your lovely praise by the way. I appreciate it more than you know. You are doing wonderfully here, keep up the good work!
Happy Writing!
SG