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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How about you post another chapter some time in the near century
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg this is amazing, please update asaP!
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are u ever going to continue??
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! You have to continue this.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know that you have to continue this, right? I can't wait to read the rest!
KUTGW.
KUTGW.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... this is actually turning out to be good... i'm alittle agitated because i don't know what he saw exactly.... update soon!
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story; love to see more.
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to keep writing this? It certainly started out promising. You should give us even more set-up, though, before you get into a full fledged sexual tryst, and really concentrate on the psychological aspects for both characters. Good luck.
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm hoping you can let me know next time you post :) I travel a lot for work, so lose track of many stories.
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this, the premise is original! Looking forward to your next update!