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for The Dream

by lilbitbord

schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is very good congrats. I also noticed you liked handing out baked good for thanks, and I like to do the same so for all your hard work - hands fresh triple chocolate brownies -

ps. I actually have triple chocolate brownies in the oven. :D
person Di
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good Fic, I'm off to see if you have any more of this sort. I like that you came full circle at the end.
person sbrande
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just a couple of mistakes. The one that stuck out was near the beginning.

He forcefully grabs my chin,