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for 5 Years Later

by RemusLupinFanGirl

schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I am glad that everyone knows the truth now. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. Looking forward to the next one. I think that this story could be done in the next chapter or two because Remus and Hermione have each let someone know about them. I think that maybe they could agree to tell everyone else so that they no longer have to keep it a secret. Hermione could then ask Harry to be the godfather to their unborn child.
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to the next one.
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A grea chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is not a review. Seeing as how you are stuck on this story and are asking for help, the only thing I can do is to give you a few ideas. I think that since Remus, Hermione, and the others are at the reunion and no one knows about Remus and Hermione being married, you could write that Harry tries to set Draco and Hermione up with each other. Then she can say that she is taken already and when it is revealed that Remus is her husband, she can also reveal that they are expecting. Harry might get a bit upset and decide he doesn't want to be around Hermione for a while because she has been secretly married for five years to the last of his father's friends. Time could pass and Hermione would give birth to the baby. Remus could then talk to Harry about being the baby's godfather and Ginny could be the godmother. Even though it seems that I am the only one to review this story. I hope that you will be able to finish it. I think that you could have it done in maybe 3 or 4 chapters.
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. Waiting patiently for the next one.
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is much better after being corrected. Patiently waiting for the next chapter to see what happens at the reunion.