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for Root Cause

by SickPuppy

person delia cerrano
schedule September 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Didn't like it as much as your others.  Don't know why maybe because they had no permanent connection between Severus and Harry or Harry and Draco even Lucius had no permanant connection to any of them.  Okay I guess I am kind of stodgy and weird... love M/M but do not like 3somes.

 

person DinaTheCat
schedule April 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha XD This is hilarious!
person Rylan
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Humour . . . hotness . . . everything y'all do so well! Enjoyed it very much.

Small editing note - regarding "issue spew forth" - I know you were trying to choose the right word, but forgot to remove the other . . . Feel free to delete this review so other people don't see me being picky.

Ta!
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Oh...My...God!" Harry screamed ecstatically, "FuckmeFuckmeFuckme!!" he trilled as his balls tightened and he exploded against the sofa arm.

*Giggles* Well, isn't that naughty!
This whole fic was naughty, it a delicious way!

person cravedom
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He he he, Draco is so evil and Harry is such a dumbass. I almost spewd my coffee when Severus explained how the root must be prepared and Harry thought it was a cure for ED. So what is the root/potion for?
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The Boy Who Screamed! That was funny and scream worthy. I love the whole misunderstanding at the beginning. Poor Harry, trying to give Severus his 'root.' I guess someone got the root in the end. That was funny.
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This had some 'WTF' factor to it, but I liked it. :D