rate_review Reviews

omg nice ending!

I am sooo going to miss this! Fantastic!!!

Wow that was pretty cool! But, while it does read like the end, it all screams out for a sequel! *grins*
You know, one with Hermione & Blaise's Wedding, and Harry and Draco trying to cope at Hogwarts...

:fans self: mmm very good story(though you still need to update that one whos title exscapes me at the moment((its been that long since u updated)) the one with the dogs and harry and draco) anywho as for your writing? yes there are mistakes...but for people who enjoy your stories....we look past those and take in the content that is the story...people who spend more time picking out your errors and less time just enjoying the story....need to bug off they arent worth your time.....besides i might be pretty good at the gramme part of writing when i want to be but i cant spell for a lick so pish on them...

this was very very good keep writing and post soon
bye bye

Fantastic chapter-- very hot. The chapter read beautifully. Having someone read the chapter over for you worked really well-- now your awesome writing isn't distracted by little mistakes. Great job. When this story ends, I'll be looking for more of your work!

Sooo need chapter 6!!! Even though it means the end!

lol. i LOVED the line damn the torpedoes full speed ahead! its from one of my favorite movies. i know its also a famous quote but every time i hear it or read it i think of the movie The More the Merrier. lol.

You are my saving angel. I was reading a story and it was so sad I couldn't stop crying. But then I found this one and it was exactly what I needed to laugh again. It's so funny and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Love
--xAkireix

PS. I don't see anything wrong with your English so don't let anyone get you down. Just keep writing the way you were doing and if there are mistakes, so what. That happens to everyone. ^.^

i love your story, and don't worry what people say about your writing. For it not being your first language you write pretty well. yes, you make some mistakes but not enough to make the story hard to read. Listen to the person who got her Bachelor's Degree in English.