rate_review Reviews

I don't know how I missed this story! It was great! I'm off to see if you have more stories posted...

OMG that was such a cute story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love them...all of them
loved this entire story...i was goin along and smilin for most of the story, and i was sad when draco was gunna walk out and then when harry was crying and smiling the rest of it
you've written such believable and authentic versions of these characters
Great story
-Kyle

im so sorry i never reviewed until now, i lost the link and forgot your name, when i saw your response to my review i remembered. your english improved also through the writing of this. i loved it, thoroughly. sorry again SDL

you know I wasn't sure about this story when I read the title but I'm glad I read it,
this was pretty good.

oh, and as for comments made about your grammar, personally you did pretty good for someone who speaks a foreign language, because I have seen WORSE.

Other than a few mishaps, at least the story flows and it's coherent which is
something some English speaking folks can't brag about.

awww what a happy fluffy little ending! lol

Sorry about missing chapter five, I am a bit behind in my reading. This was so sweet and happy. Isn't it nice to have things go well without any trauma? Well at least sometimes. I do like my angst and dark stories, but this felt like a coffee break and now we are all refreshed and alert and ready.

That was absolutely darling, dear.
I'm surprised drama queen Draco didn't want to dress up with Mione!
Keep them coming (:
Et hearts;
Zombiee

so I'm a really terrible person. I used to be a really good reviewer and now i'm crap at it. I really did like this story though and I know how disheartening it is to have that weird disappointing review count between chapters. I just wanted to tell you that the story was great and I really enjoyed it!

In one of your introductions you spoke about English not being you first language. One of the nice things about English is that it is versatile and can be used in different ways. In your last chapter, I think that there was only one sentence which was difficult, I think mainly because you translated an idiom out of your own language.

So - a couple of mistakes is 'no reason to beat yourself over the head' [I wonder how that idiom comes out in your language?]

I enjoyed the story and hope that you will write some more. If you wish you can email me at jmwt@blueyonder.co.uk.

LOL Poor Hermione. You made it sound like Draco was leaving Harry there for a bit. I can't believe that Draco didn't see the solution himself. That is a great story.

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