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person smmz79
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA I just LOVE draco in this he sooo loveable and sarcastic... i love it... i loved that he was jealous enough of some neighborhood kid to actually cut her grass that was funny as hell..... OMG if only ol lucius could see him cutting grass.... oh i do love lucius though... yummy... anyhoo i am getting distracted... love the chap great job esp the whole talk with harry...
person Elphaba
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Love how she opened up a bit and what a "good boy" Draco was
person mandy
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
why do i get the feeling that lucius is going to think draco is doing the same type of rebelling that he did, and demand he get over his little fling and marry a pureblood of his choosing? can't wait for that confrontation! keep up the good work. i follow every one of your fics, usually silently, but i do love them. hoping to see the next chapter in girl talk soon!
person Elphaba
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved that Chapter!
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesomely gorgeous chapter SG!!! I love Heart too; I like they're earlier stuff like, Crazy over You, and Magic Man. When Hermione dashed to the kitchen, I choked up a bit myself, and even more so when Draco started to sing Something. I heard Jim Sturgess singing it as well!! I love Across The Universe, watched it over ten times. Can't wait for the next installment!!
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey Goddess, a litte late on the draw with reviewing your chapters, have been out of the loop myself, wel those last 3 chappys ruled and more brilliant work as usual and I wouldn't expect less. I laughed so much oh my.

Chapter 10
well isnt draco just the handiest handy wizard ever....lol the banter here killed me, and deep side convo with harry was so kool and poor harry didnt know what to make of it, and I guess he can see now that he really cares for her. I wonder if rodney is going to make another appearance and cause trouble...not that I want him too though, but I know something has to along to burst their bubble. Oh well it was a fun chapter.

Chapter 11
Sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!, he made all her birthday gifts and the song he made her, and lunch on the roof and sex on the harley, and the ride on the elephant, awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!, what else do u want me to say. It was all bloody brilliant, and draco doesnt even understand it all himself, I find that hard to believe. I loved it, made me realize that there arent any good men left in the world...lol.

Keep up the great work and keep it coming.
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goddess, chapter 12 was sooooooo hot, and i knew the inevitable was coming to shake things up a bit, and that would be one lucius malfoy, and I hope hermione understands draco now to a better point than before, and boy was that lemon scene just so beautifully done. and i cant wait to read another chapter it was wonderful as draco finally figured out a major part of his feelings towards her. update soon.
person Muffy
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my this is such a lovely and romantic story. I'm somewhat new this ship and oh man there are some good fic here. You seem to be a multi-shipper for Hermione and I appreciate that greatly. Remember is simply brilliant.

I quite enjoy this Draco. He's still canon Draco but matured and he's vulnerable, which is very endearing. Hermione is precious, she's just so Hermione. I have been happy sighing through all the chapters. I look forward to reading more as you have time. Bless!
person Elphaba
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Story was awesome! Loved the foreplay gave me some ideas!

LOVED the Toy descriptions!
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the key ingredients of a good relationship is communication and I'm so pleased to see it come into play here. I don't think it's a weakness to be honest and say what you think and work together at sorting things out (pity I don't have that strength of character myself - lol) I hope Draco remains as true to himself once his parents are in the picture. As for the love making scene (I simply cannot call that a sex scene), that was so beautifully warm and passionate and I loved reading Draco's realisation on the matter. Brilliant chapter, my dear. :)

Wow, HEART is still about! I bet it was a great concert. They have some great songs. Actually I was considering one of their songs for your D/H lovesong challenge.