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Couldn't stop laughing, love! (I think Michael was getting irritated at me because I kept guffawing and interrupting his game!) Excellent chapter-just what I needed! Enjoy the party and e-mail me any embarrasing gossip that happens. (Just kidding.)
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That was as good as i was expecting. the stuff under the bed priceless. i wish i had half of the imagination that you do. i can't wait to see what you do next.hope you have a wonderful party. try not to get too drunk. hangover with kids suck. as well you probably know.

Brilliant! I remember getting caught by my Nana once...*shudders* She wasn't nearly as funny as Lucius nor as prudish as Narcissa (doesn't like sex...oh man that killed me. :)). Enjoy your party and thanks for the update!

This is the best story. It always makes me laugh.

OMG that was sooo sweet he really does spoil her.... i loved everyone of those gifts esp. with the little cards... how sweet.... draco is way too funny... 'your malfoy is showing'.... 'no he is not'.... omg i lmao!!!!!!

Hey Party Girl, Hope your head isn't too sore. Sorry I haven't reviewed all week but I didn't even get a chance to read, so you get one big review for the past four chapters.
A Syltherin on a bike...I swoon. Damn you paint Draco so hot and sweet. The Birthday gifts he created for her were amazing. It's my Birthday next week, can I borrow him?
The one scene that stands out most (besides Lucius smirking at a naked Hermione) is Studley jumping up and knocking Lucius over. I would give a thousand galleons to see that, HEE HEE. Why is it that dogs always like those that don't like them? It's a mystery.
So Draco is so going to marry her because he seriously has it bad. I loved that he was so gentle and loving with her and felt incredible emotion for her and then still asked himself, "is this love?". Guys are so thick sometimes.

OMG what an awesome chap.... they made love for the first time.... he does love her you can see it in everything that he does.... great job..... i was tearing up when he sang their song to her..... it was beautiful then he took her to bed... omg how romantic.... and yeah enter the family!!!! i already love lucius in this he is going to be great i can see it already!!!!

Firstly, have a wonderful time at your party tonight and I do hope you manage to struggle on valiantly at work the next day hungover or otherwise. :)

A comedy of errors indeed. I don't know how I expected the Malfoys to find out but that certainly wasn't it. LMAO Narcissa's idea of her son in danger was touching and yet at the same time so fricken hilarious and Lucius, well of course he enjoyed the eyeful he got. I've always loved that saying "I'm old/married, not dead'. It's just so true. I also loved how protective Lucius was of Narcissa when they first entered the room. In all, despite the eye-popping first meeting, I think that went rather well. :)

I really do like your fic; I love how you've characterized Draco and Hermione, I love how their relationship is developing, the birthday chapter was so great, and this chapter is so sweet. I can't wait to see the elder Malfoys' reactions to the relationship. One thing that bugs me though is that the Beatles song is called "Something". Just "Something." I'm glad you credited George Harrison (Frank Sinatra said that "Something" was his favorite Lennon/McCartney song which is funny) and he got the first lyric from James Taylor's song "Something In The Way She Moves" so you could be thinking of that title. Here is link to the wikipedia entry on just this song, it has some cool trivia (like the Sinatra thing)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Something

Holy Hit what an awesome chap... you write the best sex scenes after i read them my lucky fiance gets attacked.... :) I loved the idea of the pearls.... great chap.. and i am glad that draco is opening hermione up