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person Lisi
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, and this chapter was sweet, but you should find a way to end with Hermione's insecurities, because is obvious that Draco is smitten with her. KEep going, please, the plot is good, and the way you portray Narcissa is sometimes hilarious.
A hug
Lisi
person KellyJCR
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shouldn't she know by now that Draco is possesive of his relationship with her. Possesive isn't the right word but he seems very dedicated and likes to keep her close. I guess we all have our old hang ups from time to time. As much as Hermione analyzes everything I would think she would get curious as to the nature of the relationship. I thought this muggleborn issue would rear its ugly head eventually. I guess Draco will have to just ease her mind and finally put the subject to rest. i love the teasing side of Lucius he seems alot like my father-in-law its done out of affection not spite. Looking forward to the fight. Well done!!!
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was such I cute chapter. Lucius cracked me up :) can't wait for the reunion
person kazfeist
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, SG, you've really got Hermione down to a T. That's exactly how I see her, with even more beauty on the inside than on the outside. And, I can understand how she's confused. My first husband was a pretty boy. He eventually left, and it threw me for a loop. Glad you've got a happy ending planned, and I hope Draco's gonna man up and show up at the reunion...for her, of course. :D
person Laur
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Property of Draco Malfoy Bit was hillarious!
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A little stress and strife is part of a real relationship and I love the way you write them and this story, so no worries! Thank you for updating regularly and doing such a great job on it. I check daily and smile hugely each time I see you've updated. Hugs, HG4eva
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa absolutely cracks me up in this fic! Fanning herself and getting all upset over Draco and Hermione having sex. Too funny! I feel sorry for her, coming to the realization that she may be missing something in her relationship with Lucius. I would be happy to take him off her hands if she'd like to find someone knew. *evil laugh*

I think Draco will end up going to the reunion with her. Either from the beginning or deciding last minute and surprising her. Either way, I look forward to everyone's reaction if, in fact, he does go.

I'm not worried about the inevitable fight they are going to have. All that means is incredible make up sex! LMAO!
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I was squirming with embarrassment right alongside Hermione in this chapter. What a conversation to be having. LOL And you made me feel so sorry for Narcissa that she felt that no-one ever looked at her the way Draco was looking at Hermione. I guess an arranged marriage has a different outlook on a relationship but still, I wanted her to feel truly loved. Maybe something will change as your story continues even if its not about the senior Malfoys. (I can hope) I do think that the womenfolk have more in common with eachother than they supposed and I love that Lucius is constantly teasing Hermione. Methinks that Draco will go to the reunion. :)
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
once again you write about Hermione's insecurities beautifully. I do hope that if they do fight or argue or whatever that it lasts more than just one chapter. I hate when things resolve too quickly because real life isnt like that. You are such a great author and I love Lucius. <3
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He should change his mind and go with her, thats what I think lol