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person LadySaphire
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Ron would say...Bloody Brilliant

person genna
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Marriage is too serious for impulsiveness. I just watched a movie called I Think I Love My Wife. Men go off the rails sometimes. If the process of arriving at getting married was well planned out and well thought through, they might be less inclined to give up on their marriage and go somewhere else.

When the tedium of marriage sets in, what do couples have to rely on if not the process. Passion fades. Children strain. Process is what steadies people when they start squirming and shifting wondering what else there is.
person Elphaba
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the Stunned Hermione! LOL Beautiful chapter!
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!!!! Awesome chapters!!! I laughed out loud for a bunch of different instances!! Can't wait to see the aftermath, at the Grangers.... will be a gem I'm sure. Take care SG
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~*SG*~


A beatuiful wedding night!! ***SIGH*** Sweet and tender and romantic.....the way it should be. :)

LMAO at all of the Weasleys, Harry, and Lucius and Narcissa arriving on their doorstep. Lovingthe way Lucius took charge, and I too feel bad that the family (his and hers) were left out of the wedding process. But sometimes thats the way it goes because each couple must do whats right for them.

I cracked up at the thought of charlie flashing his tongue ring at Narcissa.....do you think she'll get to see his pierced nipples at a family gathering? I would love to see her reaction to that.

I adore Draco's sense of humor and the way he handled the situation....

And as for Big Daddy.....well, I'll call him that whenever he wants me to.

Also glad to see that Studly can;t wait for the little Malfoys to start tugging his ears....

Wonderful Update!!!

Love
Lady B*
xoxoxoxo
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved both chapters...throwing up on Lucius would have been priceless...hope Hermione's parents take it well as everybody else...more soon please 10/10 xxxxx
person Gertie
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The vomit bit was bloody fantastic! How great to crank out all explainations in one go? Certainly makes things easier. And of course Narcissa would swoon over a party and a baby and nearly faint from Charlie and his tounge stud. Perhaps he could show her a thing or two...maybe help with her allergy.

It's nice to read about the romance of weddings. All the love and promise. Personaly I believe that 90% of people getting married shouldn't. Of course I am a hypocrite because I am married and always believe myself to be the exception to the rule. I did it for the dress, the gifts, and the tax break. (wink wink)
person MB3
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The way you have written these last couple of chapters kind of reminds me of my parents. When my mom was younger, she had commit problems. Due to this, she and my dad dated for around 3 years before I unexpectedly came along. They were very much in love but my appearance is what helped push my mom to agree to get married. They probably would have been married right away too, but when they were talking to Justice of the Priests to get someone to officiate, it was strongly recommended that if they wanted any type of honeymoon to wait until after the first trimester. It can be seen how closely my parents followed this advice by the fact that I was born six months to the day after their ceremony. I am now the oldest of three kids and my parents have been married for over 20 years and are still going strong. I thank you for reminding me of the good memory :).

This story is absolutely fantastic, by the way. Studly is hillarious and Draco's antics usually make me laugh at least once a chapter. Hermione throwing up on Lucius in this chapter was absolutely priceless.
person kymmy
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As you said, what a treat to get 2 chaps in one day.... and they are great 2 chaps too. I very much enjoy your stories and this one in particular. Sorta sorry to hear it's coming to an end, but I guess on that just means I have whatever your next tale is to look forward to.
person Utopia
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She was sick on his shoes!

I can't write anything else in the review, I'm too busy learning how to breathe through my laughter!