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person Lady T
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A lovely job as always :)
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg this story was Brilliant!!!!
you did a great job as always... Awesome!!!
person Michi
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well as if i didn't love Malfoy Sr. enough already, you really did me in... naughty Lucius, no hexing off your son's balls...

way to go with the naming, i mean, Scorpius? honestly Draco/Asteria, what baby name book were you reading? Thorne... so cute and could definitely fit into the Harry Potter saga quite snugly.

anyway, what a perfect ending to such a fun, sexy, altogether well-written, and pleasantly super-angst-free story!
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stands and begins clapping at the computer and shouting 'bravo' and then realises she looks like an idiot and sits back down. (It was worth the cheering and yelling though - LOL) Wonderful end to a wonderful story - you've done it again!! Although I was moved to tears when she let Lucius touch her belly and feel the baby move and he was so in awe and thankful for it. Good timing having Harry come in and hear the 'Big Daddy' bit because how could I keep the tears going after reading that? Found it funny for me to recognise the signs of the beginnings of labour in your story when I have two children and both times did not realise I was. Given that the little buggars decided to come 3 and then 9 weeks early, you could say that being aware that I was going in to labour was the last thing on my mind. Anyway loved how Hermione let rip with all the curse words and refused to let Draco touch her and how Lucius was ready to hex Draco for her. And what an awwww moment at the end when he was getting their son to sleep by playing lullabies on the piano. Beautiful. I could be greedy though and say I would love to know how Lucius and Narcissa acted around their grandson but of course, you have to stop somewhere. :)
person crissy
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet. and funny. a great read. i liked it very much.
person Janeplay
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!!! It's over already?! And it was sooo good. Oh, well. I'll just have to read your next story instead. It was a blast, and I really loved the way you wrote Draco. Very cool. And the bit where Hermione breaks down the last wall with Lucius was great.
person shelagh
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Execellent work as always.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story. Draco's reaction to the baby was priceless. And surprising Hermione with a wedding was so perfect for this story. Everything between them has been spontaneous up to this point, why not a wedding too! The scene with everyone talking at once and Hermione puking on Lucius was so funny! And totally believeable with that crew. I knew Narcissa's mood would change once she found out about the baby. Can't wait to see what happens next!
person Michi
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i've been following this for quite some time (sry this is only the first review, busy with college and whatnot) and i have to say this is one of my favourite stories ever! and such speedy updates! you really are the bomb XD

Big Daddy... *giggle-snort* oh mi gawd it's just PRICELESS!!!
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! I love it when you have a plot to a story with steamy sex in there as well. Keep up the great work!