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person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

This Draco is just so sweet.

person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Uh oh, is Lucius going to blow when he finds out? Or is Narcissa, being a helicopter mom going to catch them in bed together? Maybe it will be a normal meet, can't wait to find out.

person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

That was great! Narcissa got what she deserved, invading her son's bedroom so early in the morning. Lucius is just shameless, and it was funny. I loved that Draco transfigured Hermione's shirt to say "My boyfriend's dad saw me naked". Seriously, I love this Draco.

person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

The chair. I wondered if it would make another appearance.

person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Hermione has some serious self esteem issues. I think Draco just doesn't want to put her in the headlines and be judged for being with him.

person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

I'm glad they finally figured out what their feelings were/are. They are both relationship challenged. Glad their figuring it out.

person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Aww, so sweet. This Draco is giving me cavities. lol

person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

So sweet he planned their wedding and surprised her with the dress and flowers. The only thing not mentioned was a photographer. I can't wait for the parents to find out about the marriage and the baby.

person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

How did I know that the Prophet would ruin D&He's ability to share THEIR news with their families. They should sue for breach of privacy. I loved Hermione throwing up on Lucius' shoes, that was frickin funny. I also love how Draco playful goad's his parents. I will say it again, I love this playfully sweet Draco. He still has his snark but he's so damn adorable.

person emo44
schedule November 13, 2023 at 12:00 AM

You wrote a beautiful story. I loved it. Somehow I wish there were more. The characters you created in this story are now one of my favorites. I don't know if you still check this account but I want you to know I throughly enjoying this story. Actually, I have found I greatly enjoy your writing. I've been reading through some of your stories, right now I'm skipping the one-shots but I'll go back to them after the chapter stories. I really only like D&H, L&H and S&H stories. Maybe some day I'll try other pairings but not now, and never Ron and Hermione, yuck! I have a hard time with Harry and Hermione, they just seem more like siblings to me.

Thank you for sharing your imagination, freely. Much appreciated.