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for A Black Mistake

by Gryffindorclutz

person Phiana
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honestly you are amazing!! I love your writing, you can really tell that you enjoy writing these fanfics. I have been reading fanfiction for years now and all of your stories are right each time. Bloody FANTASTIC please keep it up!!!

schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! I LOVED IT!!!
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I had to peek because you were listed as the author and I just really like your stuff. This is a very interesting premise to Lucius/Narcissa, and I really like the way you've reworked their background so far. As usual your non-con makes me feel bad for liking it, but I did...it was hot...and Lucius is in his best Dom form here so I can't wait to see how you continue this and how Narcissa gets out of her situation and winds up claimed completely by Lucius. Great opening...
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...what an interesting fic! I found it a little hard to beleive Lucius was that heartless with Narcissa's first time. I always saw those two despite all Death Eater crap around them as a very much in love couple and that their love began before they became an official couple.

But I love what you've written so far...keep it going!

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