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for A Black Mistake

by Gryffindorclutz

person LZ
schedule April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
While I usually lean towards anything with hermione I was especially intrigued with this story. The sex and dominance was exciting and I loved the power struggle between the two leads before Narcissa eventually gave in. I wold love to read more.
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should def continue this
person Phiana
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
where have you gone...????? Please update this story it is one of my favs on here!!! Please
person drkdsire
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"When she had children, she was going to make certain that her boys were never troublesome and always perfect angels"...until they were shunned by Harry Potter, then they turn into right dicks.

I think you've got me hooked.
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and really wish you would continue it! I love your work and really think you could something fun with this...please?
person Phiana
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry and update, your killing me with the waiting game. PLEASE there is only so much more that i can take!!!
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHH! This was good. Actualy good does not even begin to describe it. I absolutly loved it. Bravo.
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that your story inspired mine. I have officially written my first NB/LM fic thanx to you called - Behind the Closed Doors. Please read it and let me know what you think. Thanks and update soon!
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just had to re-read and review this fic again. This story was very well written. I really hope you update soon. I wonder if there are more LM/NB fics like this out there. If there are please let me know!


LaLa Out...
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story deserves so much more praise. I don't understand why you haven't gotten more reviews. Well, maybe the fact that everyone has to be signed in to do it might have something to do with it.

Anyway, excellent story. I love my Slytherins dominent. I think you captured their charecters really well. I totally see this situation happening.

Since you wanted to make this a Dramione, I believe you still can...Just write a sequel, maybe naming it 'Like Father Like Son' or something of that sort. You can definatly come up with something...marriage law, dicrease of pureblooded babies, etc...

Update soon!!!

Five STARS!

LaLa Out...