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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where the hell Tristan did come from? Surprisingly another blond, eh? Perhaps Harry has repressed desires for Malfoy and they surfaced in his attraction to Tristan? Just a thought...
Best line: Ron shrugged.
Best line: Ron shrugged.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course there is drama, they are high school kids. Now Knot is going to be all pissy and he is no telling what he will do.
When are we going to find out the bid secret?
When are we going to find out the bid secret?
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!!!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nott aggervates me...can we hit him with a bus? mmmmm pppppwease?
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aah, poor Griffin. I feel really bad for Draco too. What's going to happen next... *dun dun*. Update soon!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Achg, I had hoped Harry would give up on the little evil plan. I guess we now have to see what happens. Do we actually have an expensive disaster happening?
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Draco.... poor Griffin... ;_;
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"If he were so good, then why did he feel like scum rolled over?"
Because Harry is acting like scum, duh!
*shakes head* Poor Griffin, the guy didn't know what hit him.
Draco will eventually catch on to their little scheme; it always happens.
Good chapter! update!
Because Harry is acting like scum, duh!
*shakes head* Poor Griffin, the guy didn't know what hit him.
Draco will eventually catch on to their little scheme; it always happens.
Good chapter! update!
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't like this. Not one bit. BAD THEO! Leave Harry be! :P
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this review is over the whole story so far, im not sure if thats how your supposed to do it because i've never written a review before, but because you expressed how much you like them, and i liked the story, i thought i would.
I was surprised to say that i really enjoyed reading this. this is the first non-magical fan-fic i've read and i enjoy how you've kept all the characters and completely changed the plot. i like that you portray emotions and attitudes with out having to explain it all in long worded paragraphs. he's not sure how he feels so trying to explain it like that would be confusing and tiresome. Harry's actions in public and in private are very telling, but what isn't told you portray quickly. i like that its all from Harry's perspective although another perspective wouldn't be remiss. i like how you reference to the past without dwelling on it, this story is about the present.
i really hope you update soon, i want to read more.
I was surprised to say that i really enjoyed reading this. this is the first non-magical fan-fic i've read and i enjoy how you've kept all the characters and completely changed the plot. i like that you portray emotions and attitudes with out having to explain it all in long worded paragraphs. he's not sure how he feels so trying to explain it like that would be confusing and tiresome. Harry's actions in public and in private are very telling, but what isn't told you portray quickly. i like that its all from Harry's perspective although another perspective wouldn't be remiss. i like how you reference to the past without dwelling on it, this story is about the present.
i really hope you update soon, i want to read more.