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for Expensive Disaster

by Digitallace

person fallenangel1129
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! you had to end it that way didnt you -_- so mean
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I hate Theo, he's really irritating. I love that Harry finally forgave Draco. Hopefully it lasts. They are the best ship.
person I.Drowned.My.Goldfish
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I so absolutely hate you right now for leaving it there...
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...if someone bursts in and ruins this, I swear to God I'll cry.
person maegerakawaii
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What a horrible cliffhanger. I need to find out what happens soon or I am going to burst. This story is really awesome so far. It's also the first I've ever reviewed. YAY!
person qwerty
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why would you do that to us? I mean, really. Why?
*sigh*
Anyway, I like the pacing of the story; it's just right. Good chapter
Have a good trip!
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heya ^^
I've been following the progress of this story for quite some time now and I have to say it's reaaaally good!
And to come to your question whether there should be the draco pov now I'd suggest "no"!
Cause if you stay with harry's pov it's creates more suspense!
Now the reader is also wondering if draco is trying to get something out of the situation!
So if you change the pov now the reader knows every detail and it gets all fluffy/drama/predictable!
Pleaaaaase stay with harrys'/general pov!
That's so much more fun to read :3
Waiting hungrily for the next chap!

Greetz from germany Drachenfliege
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heeheehee! *heartheart*
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8!!!
person Yaoi_Vixen
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bring on the drama :P. I already like Tristan...Poor Draco though (and Theo's an arse ^^). Please update soon!