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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this - great start - please update as quickly as you can :)
schedule
August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule
August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i am really excited!!! it sounds wonderful, poor hermoine though! i am really looking forward to what you have planned next! :) i do hope that you have lots more planned for this story and you will be updating soon! :)
schedule
August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story, I look forward to seeing how this delevops.
schedule
August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is promising. I can't wait for the update. You write clearly and don't use superfluous words. Even though it's only been one chapter, it seems like you have a pretty good handle on how to keep the characters true, even though the story is AU/AR. Please update soon!
schedule
August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a wonderful angsty beginning!
schedule
August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intreging beginning.I cant wait to read more.
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RWH
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon i like it,
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic, and so original. I can't wait to read more! thank you thank you thank you for writing a story for us!