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for The Seven Year Sleep

by ellaevenstar

schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start! It reminds me of a movie called Regarding Henry, was this story inspired by it? Keep up the good work :) ~LuvSeverus
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I read a memory loss Hermione HG/SS story a few weeks ago - but it didn't end the way I would've liked - and I have been searching - to no avail - for similar stories since. I think it's a good plot line with lots of possible angst.

After reading the second chapter of your story though I wonder if your memory-loss-Snape is not really a memory deficient Snape but the real younger Snape somehow transported from the past into this future self? It would explain why they found him in ths Shack and his bleeding neck...?

I like it nevertheless, I'm glad that you're antcipiating fairly quick updates :)
person neelix
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god...tugging at the heart strings....

nice update!
person ismene5
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I want more!!!!!!
It's so touching.
A great love story.
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is so cool, thanks for the updates can i have some Pleaseee'
person nastygrl
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've only just come across this story, but I must say, it is wonderful! I immediately thought of the Harrison Ford movie, regarding Henry, and I chuckled when I say your note regarding the movie (it truly is a wonderful movie, I do recommend it). By the end of the second chapter, when she leaves and Severus knows it is wrong, my mind kicked into overdrive, what has he been working on? A new potion? Who had he been meeting, and why had it gone wrong? Why did he pull back from Hermione, was she in danger? I must admit, as well, that my heart clutched. I just can't wait for the next chapter! I'd love to hear what your plans are for the story, it is so well written and it keeps my interest! Feel free to E-mail. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of, I'm available.
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really do like this, I'm fairly new to Snape/Hermione, mainly being a Lucius/Hermione & Draco/Hermione reader. But this caught my eye and I have to say it is brilliant! Really well written and I cannot wait for more!
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am HOOKED! This is awesome. I can't wait for more! Update again soon please!
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good so far,,keep up the good work..cant wait for more..so post more soon please..
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.