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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well crap, that does not sound very promising. Lucius really goofed this one and I fear what he may do in an attempt to fix it. Being a Malfoy is very complicated; isn't it?
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was a very angsty chapter. Really beautifully done. I love the high emotions, but not overdone-- very nice. Looking forward to more.
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 10!!! How do you write all these stories at once and keep them not only separated but an interesting read as well?
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh Harry. My heart breaks!
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo!! ;_; Please update soon! Evil cliffies! ;_;
There are some type-os. It says "no" instead of "not" in one place where Harry is speaking with Narcissa. Also, in one place you are lacking a begining quotation mark when Harry is speaking. :)
There are some type-os. It says "no" instead of "not" in one place where Harry is speaking with Narcissa. Also, in one place you are lacking a begining quotation mark when Harry is speaking. :)
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. So angsty and so beautiful. Poor Harry, and poor, confused Draco. More soon, please! ^_^
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't have time to log in, but I loved this! I've been checking it whenever I have time. I really like your style, just enough angst without it turning into a pity party. I really hope you keep that up. I feel a little bad for Snape though, just a little. :) I hope you have fun on your trip! Update as soon as possible!
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Poor Harry and Draco hope it'll work out for them. Hope there will be soon.
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 9!!!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:sniffles: