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Sooo need chapter 13!!! Oh Draco!!! You are sooo soooo stupid!! What were you thinking? You fool!!!

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story

Does Harry know Draco didn

I am so sorry, first of all, for not reviewing before this. I have been coming to this story for weeks now and always seem to have some dire emergency pop up at the end of every chapter just before I review... so look at this one as make up for all those I missed. Firstly: you. are. wonderful. I have been looking and looking for an author who really portrays Harry and Draco with enough similarities from the book that its believable while at the same time moving into their own style that it catches the eye of the reader and has that personal flair. You have accomplished both with high flying colors! Fifty points to the Author! Also, since this was the first of your stories I read, then I was a bit of a creeper and looked at the rest of you work and may I just say I have never seen a better Harry / Draco author than you. Your consistency between each story while contrasting plot lines has me drooling on my keyboard. The chemistry between your characters is almost tangible and it makes the story explode on the page. Your writing pace is so natural; events don't happen suddenly and unexpectedly in a manner that leaves me as a reader jostled out of the story. Everything is smooth, your transitions are flawless and your cliff hangers. kill. me. Also I want to give you betta lots and lots of points too because they have consistently kept the story perfectly polished- you two area dynamic duo if ever I saw it! Next your plot lines: they never loose their flavor. This one is a particular favorite of mine because its kept out of the smutty gutter and into a higher class. I love the angst, the suspension. I find myself screaming at Draco to stop being such a prat and at Harry trying to mentally will himself to trust for once and tell Daco what he really feels. Oh boys... I could get into a psychological reason for why your characters seem so real, talking ego and the ID and character flaws: but all of that seems so cut and dry- lending nothing to the praise I want to give you. So I'll ignore it and just say your characters pop off the page and hit me like they're real. And they're so bad its good. And you update consistently. I can not tell you what that does for me. I feel like, as an author, I can trust you to never leave me wanting. (Well ok wanting a little but never wanting long for a new chapter!) Its really nice to see the dedication you have to your stories and it draws me to the rest of your work. Lastly I wanted to thank you for making such beautiful artwork out of these two. I have never been so attached to two boys before and now find myself entirely addicted. The dialogue is always sharp and biting, or tender and loving. You never leave out any details and I never feel like you haven't described the scene enough for me. You include body language and clearly know it takes more than just some pretty words out of someone's pretty lips to communicate need or want or lust. The story stays believably within the confines of the Wizarding World while venturing far far beyond into the world of Fandom. I love your stories. I love your work. Thank you always. Forgive me for not commenting or reviewing before this- as an author of your cunning deserves reader's reviews. Expect to hear from me sooner than you think!

Elise

<@ (Also, here is some ice cream I got just for you, it's Orangitangerine!)

ARGH! You are driving me crazy with this kind of endigs >.< Well this is amazing story as your others too ^^

sexual frusration much why can't the characters just talk to eachother.. oh right cause the story would be over by the first chapter. i'm enjoying the frustaton i really am but when...?

Love the story so far the rules are great and I can see Draco telling them to someone.I can see him getting board and running away because of BLAKE.Death TO BLAKE. Keep up the good work.

I really love your story. I can't wait to find out which one discovers the truth about the others feelings first, or will someone else take the situation into their own hands to get them together. I love how they both seem to think that something more coould be happening and then the other one just has to protect themself and ruin the moment. It's very true, considering their past and present situations.

OK, this is amazing! I love it! I only discovered it tonight, and read all of it up to chapter 11, and I must say, I absolutely NEED more of it! I am in love with this story now!!!

ARGH it's so frustrating, they're both falling in love with each other but they both think that the other is indifferent!!!!!! How can this be???? Why are they both so obtuse!!!!!!!?????? Of course he's not so upset that he couldn't tease Draco, he's upset that Draco wasn't jealous of him!!!!! SILLY BOYS. This is why gay guys need fag hags like me around (not that I'm a hag, quite the opposite if i do say so myself) to keep them in line and to point out the OBVIOUS to them because they just cant seem to function on their own!!!!

The Code sounds interesting, I have a kind of feeling that Ron might be involved??? Maybe? I'm not so sure but just a hunch. Gosh, I'm so wanting another kiss, or some kind of interaction between out boys!!!

OH and I have to say, I enjoy reading you AN's at the end of each chapter, they're often amusing, especially this chapter's - the white Draco bunnies who only mate with black Harry bunnies. So cute. And totally the only way it should be. I tried to explain to my boyfriend that Harry and Draco are just meant for each other, but he wouldn't have any of it. He's a bit homophobic, which could become an issue for me lol. And now that I've told you my life story, I think it's time I moved ON!!! lol

OK well, great work with this, I've really enjoyed it, and I intend to go check out some of your other works right now because I liked it so much. Update soon!!!
~gorgeousbowneyes