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for When it rains it pours

by brayzen

person KellyJCR
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great beginning and I am looking forward to more. If I could make one suggestion could you please space it out a little more so it is easier to read. Well done!!
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mione xxx i hope she will find happiness xxxx
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh shit. now im not going to the doc...hahahha i liked it!