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for Divided

by Digitallace

person ilke
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dreamy sigh* That was wonderful. Blissful really. I'm too swoony to tell you anything of use other than that I absolutely loved it. :)
person AngelMary89
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just had to tell you that I am enjoying this story. I am very glad that I have just saved a faerie! LOL!_^
person sam
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is wonderful so far. i cant wait to finish it. i love the story and how they both want want other but harry is being too stubborn. keep up the good work! :)
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo love this!
person cravedom
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to have found you, at this momment I am reading severa of your stories. Somehow I had not seen you before and after reading two of your WIP it became a mision to read it all.


I liked that this was a love story period, sometimes it is good to have a story were all that matters is the relationship. The plot was simple but the characters were not and it made it a lovely story.
person SP777
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I've just NOW finished reading it, *sigh* work & what-nots taking up my
time.

I COMPLETELY enjoyed it and what a nice little surprise, the story turned out to
be a story told to their children. :-) You don't see a lot those type of stories
as of late.

Anyway, I'm still on the lookout...now...on anything else you do.
person SP777
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #1....

Okay let me be the first to say, I see just from reading the first chapter, this
is going to be an excellent story.

Now, let me say you've just fallen victim to something I've seen a few authors do,
especially when they have a story already written....updating the chapters ALL at
once. Because, now, this will get lost in the shuffle of other stories, before it
gets noticed properly.

In the future, any stories you bring, update them a few at a time, because from
what I've seen thus far you ARE good at writing and I dislike seeing a truly good
story fall by the wayside for an author.

..and if you EVER run for President, I'll be your spokesperson. ;-)

Just joking.