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Could you please, please, please do a one-shot or some sort of side-story with the Theo/Draco part of this tragedy in full view.

Cause-cause this "I didn't drive a man to madness--make him need to change the world to get over how I broke his heart," probably my favorite line ever written. I should be studying but instead... I'm going to continue stalking your page, probably just read "There, There" a bajillion more times, lol. I really can't get enough of that story.

Anyway, think about it, pretty, pretty please?

Thanks,

Maddie

This was so crazily intense. Really well-written. Seriously. I read this back when I first saw "Change My World" on the Smutastic Awards.

Interesting!

I really loved how this story started in the middle of everything and only gave you bits and pieces to what had happened outside the confines of the cage. Reading this is very much like an outsider looking in. I appreciate that. ^^


I still have no idea whats going on - but that doesn't matter. It's not important. :D
Keep up the good work.

awe poor draco!

Interesting, though I have to dmit I didn't quite understand a good part of it...Draco didn't want to commit with Nott, which brought forth Nott becoming a Dark Lord and getting himself killed, and Harry punishes Draco for this by raping him? What am I missing?

Oh Charlotte, you're a wonderful woman. Truly. That was so incredible... Raw and powerful. What an enthralling idea to make Nott the new Dark Lord, though you always do wonderful things with his character, don't you? I think this may have been my favorite one with him in it, even though he was just mentioned, his pain was still so real and it wasn't even seen through his eyes. Bravo to you for that. The righteous indignation from Harry over Nott's death was perfect and not at all what I expected from the story. And I loved that Draco thought of Harry as his savior, that Harry's justice was enough to save him from his own grief and responsibility. A brilliant one-shot, all in all, I am still amazingly impressed with you and your ability! Write constantly!

Maddie