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by booback

person smmz79
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a horrible way to end the chap... a CLIFF!!!!!!! AHHHHHHH ok seriously what happened is the baby ok is hermione ok...... do tell.... i knew when i read the last chap and you wrote that ron was plotting that he was going to do something.... what is going to happen to him now... if i were draco and charlie i would definitely rid the world of him..... great chap... please update soon and by soon i mean like today... please....
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. im glad mione is away fron him .. please please update soon ... later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person alina290
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was good. I like it. Finally Lucius will get a grandchild.
Liz
person chyara
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Would be interesting on what Lucius thinks of the outcome...hehe
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter, I hope you will add some more before you end this story? I just loved the new divorce law, I loved how Ron discovered that he was not a father, and exactly just who was, in the courtroom. I loved that Molly chosed to believe in Hermione and for her to scorn her prat-son Ron, I guess it helped a bit that little James is still very much her grandson? I loved that Bill and Fleur flat out accepted and supported the new pairing, I love that Harry, Ginny, Neville and Luna stood by Hermione and what was rigth. I guess Lucius are happy because there will be a heir to the Malfoy name after all?
person Mia
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I genuinely like this story. And this chapter was exceptionally satisfying. I loved the lasciviousness of the previous chapters, but Lucius' reaction made me feel particularly glowy and warm. Thank you for all kinds of glowy warm happy tingly feelings inspired by your wicked mind. Thanks.

~Mia~
person poohbear74
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!

She finally got what she wanted and that is to be rid of Ron!, and live with Charlie and Draco!
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Ch. 10 is wonderful; what a great plot device! Love the little catalog of reactions at the end.
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update please