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for Freedom

by booback

person katmurphy
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, you need to update this and finish it as soon as possible. This is so... enthralling.

Cheers,
-kat
person alina290
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are so mean leaving us in a cliff. Update fast. Like now.
Liz
person kymmy
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cruel, just plain cruel to leave it there. Please, please, please update soon....
person jaimelee
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are so cruel! Leaving it with such a cliffhanger!! Please update soon! I hope the baby's okay!!
person mandigrrl
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i so love this story. but how could you stop there???????? at least you seem to update fast. good work!
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was one evil cliffhanger! Please update again soon!!!
person poohbear74
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH!,please let the baby be safe!
Another great chapter!
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG please let the baby be ok! And I hope that Lucius is there for support and not to cause trouble. Ok now I really want something painfully to happen to Ron. Hurry and update soon!
person smmz79
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved how you handled the divorce... very nicely done... i like that you let us the reader learn of the events threw a newspaper article... while sometimes having a chap devoted to the trial is perfect and helps the flow of the story the way you wrote it was perfect... i love the part where draco was preening and charlie wanted sex i loved it great job