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for Freedom

by booback

schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Something told me that they kept a list. Oh Ron is for a world of pain and humiliation...LOL YES! Please don't just leave it there tell is more about what Charlie and Draco are doing to Ron, yes I need help!!! I can't wait for more :)
person kristy
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM

omg this story is getting good. And it a about time draco charley kick ron ass. for every time he touch hermione
person alina290
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pay back is a bitch. You have such a twisted mind. Do not change. Give me more ideas of torture. This is so good. All my love to you. Keep up the good work. Next chapter please.
Liz
person SeayKat
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG Don't mind me as I roll on the floor in fits of evil laughter. Please god, tell me we get to see the rest of Ron's punishment. Pretty please with cherries, Draco AND Charlie on top. >:)
person The Bloody Baroness
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg...........i <3 this fic.........

i love to see them get their revenge, then heal him up and prolly let harry have his turn

i'm also very grateful for the quick updates!!!
person smmz79
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! YEAHHH you go draco.... i can not believe they kept a list, wow... so charlie has to knock her up again that is funny and it sounds like a competition that will last for a long time... wow the chair leg oh god draco is ruthless but of course he is he had to heal hermione and see what ron did to her every time that he got angry.... great job and i am looking forward to see where you take their relationship...
person Larrabee
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Muahahahaha! Muahahahaha!

*evil laugh*

Are fun!

Revenge - even funner!
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THATS IT! I AM COMMIN TO YOUR PLACE AND I AM GOING TO TAPE YOUR FINGERS TO YOUR KEYBOARD. THEN I AM GOING TO LOOK IN ALL YOUR FILES AND REGUALAR MAIL AND SEE IF I CANT FIND SOMETHING TO BLACK MAIL YOU FOR. HEHEHEHE.

you are evil and just mean ron wasn't even this evil and cruel they way you wrote him in this story. girrrrrrrrrrrrrowwwwwwwwwllllllllllllllllllll.. just cruel cruel cruel you should go into the tourcher business you could make a killing and you would be the most sot after tourcherer in the biz.....
update soon please
Des
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wierdly enough, the broke bones I can support, but the chair leg... that's just squicky, even if appropriate. With that tally sheet, this is going to take a couple of chapters before he gets it through his head what he put his ex through. By the time they're done, Azkaban is going to be a breeze.
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol og draco .. please please more .. later for now

angel