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for Freedom

by booback

schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the early almost Christmas present... And Mrs Malfoy too? We are in for a treat are we?
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You didn't abandon this, did you? I'm going to miss it. Eleven months is too long to wait for an update.
person TammaraG
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute story, will there be more?
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is too good to just give up on......Please finish it!! We Love Charlie, Hermione and Draco. Harry was Great in saving Hermione too!!
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY Mock the Week is soooo fucking awesome!!!! I miss it so bad since moving to Bulgaria, but thankfully my bro bought me the 'too hot for tv' DVD for my b-day (one day after charlies) and ive watched it like five times....

Not that that is important here, coz we're here to talk about you and this great story. Ill be honest, when i started to read it last night, i was a bit 'ummm' about it because, though i liked it, there seemed to be dissmissal towards the psychological affects of the whole beating up the wife. Then i told myself to shut up coz Draco and Charlie are too hot and i shouldnt be thinking at a time like this. It isnt that i dont like what you did, but i would have expected Hermione to be a little more broken by it, then again, if that was the case you would have had to have taken about five chapters just to build her back up again before getting her and Draco in the sack.

Apart from that moment when my brain decided to work beyound reading and breathing (in that order), i am finding this story fan-bloody-tastic. Especily when Draco beat the living shit out of Ron. In general, i like Ron, and i know people say how he and Hermione would never end up together, i can kinda see why they would. But in this instance, i hated him with a passion. I wanted to be there when all his bones were being broken and joined in...

Oh, and Charlie is an Idiot, for getting all uppertie about Draco coming in to some money, but i do see why, i mean, some men do get a little hurt when they feel like they are usless. But yay on the making up over pancakes (which i am now craving terribly)A little mean leaving Hermione soooo long, but i guess they had alot to discuss (inc. marrage)

About the marrage, is there a Wizarding law like in Muggle law about more than one spouse...if there isnt a law then could someone please send me there (Ill take Lucius, Severus, Sirus and Remus....who? me? greedy? never!)But it being a magical world, why do they not have Hand-fastings. I mean, you'll just need a longer ribbon...

Anyway, its hot and im dying for some food, so i am gonna go. I really do love this story, the dynamic between the three is wonderful, and im happy that they dont get jealous with each other. Also, its nice to see Longbottom. And Lucius, well, he has a good heart, but like many men, he has a habit of not using his brain so much, i am so glad he and his son have sorted themselves out.

Plese, i cant wait to read more. This is a great story, and i do absolutly love your work.
person mlui
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aah, I can't believe you left us here with such a cliffhanger!!! I really did enjoy this story so far. Though, I'm really not sure how the laws would go with her marrying both of them...I really wish she would've left Ron. She could've left him and worked on the divorce laws or have someone work on them. And when they were passed, she could've had them served to Ron. She works in the MLE, how does she do work if certain magic isn't allowed to her (or is that only on Ron and herself)? Draco and Charlie's fight was silly and could've been resolved sooner if they just spoke to each other. Hermione should have just taken their wands and locked them both in a room to sort it out. I hope you'll update again soon! =)
person kazfeist
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well! I had to read a lot of chapters to catch up, and I think the double marriage proposal is a great cliffhanger. How are you going to explain a triad marriage, though? Is your wizarding world going to allow it? Just trying to figure out the mechanics of the situation. Keep updating! :D
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY THEY ASKED HER TO MARRY THEM !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GREAT CHAPTER!
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person alina290
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, you cruel, cruel being. It took you long enough to get this up. I was wondering why you did not get them back so they could be together for Charlie's birthday? It would have been a good one. Do not get me wrong about the cruel part. I understand rl can be harsh. Keep up the good work.
Liz