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for Freedom

by booback

person Anon
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW i liked that it was really really well written
person MIA
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice Twist! And I say that with all kinds of appreciation and giddiness. After all, we're all Jessica when it comes down to it, but the whole watching someone watch is a whole new level of kink. I like it. I'll be watching for more. Thanks for the entertainment love. You're a real kick.

~Mia
person smmz79
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HA HA what a great chap!!!!! I loved it poor charlie he was really having some trouble was he not.... and him and hermione giving a little show to jessica wow but i have to admit that was really hot.... i like how insightful draco is he knew exactly what jessica was getting at... and i wonder if they are going to let her watch they could always oblivate her? hmmm... great chap... i am looking forward to what happens with ron and how he takes the divorce...
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am totally hooked!! I Love this story so far. I hope something really painfully happens to Ron. I am am little worried what is going to happen when Hermione goes home. Will Ron hurt her more and worse then he already has? I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
person poohbear74
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES,YES!!!!!!!!
SHE WILL BE FREE OF RON!
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful pairing! I love the entire story! Good work...update soon!
person KellyJCR
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story. I just wish you updated faster, I know wer all have real life to deal with but you can't blame a girl for wishing. I am looking forward to the trial (if you have one planned) and the pregnancy with Dracos baby. Looking forward to an update. Well done!!
person smmz79
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHH your a tease i was sooo hoping that we would get some hot charlie action and harry just had to make an appearance... wow ron seemed really pissed at her I hope that she is safe through the night and she is going to visit charlie in his office this should be interesting.....
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that sucks...id rather of had draco as the father BUT I KNOW that it makes more sence with charlie being the daddy haha

love your story so far