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Great new chapters.... So you took my suggestion or part of it to heart? Can't wait to see more

So good to read another chapter...a wonderfully chapter filled with deep emotions that make me thirsty for more...

I loved this chapter...it did put the who "problem" in focus...yet it seems so selfless of Harry to do so much for the one he loves, yet Anita get equal love

*cries* Asher don't believe that jerk! I feel rather sad for Harry too, he made dinner for his lovers and they didn't get to eat it nor does Harry get to spend time with them :(

*sigh* Harry can't have an easy life can he?
Nope! he can't, that would just be boring.. =P

Thanks for the update!! I thought the argument and fight scene were just fine, even though they weren't very long. It's better than I could of written thats for sure! haha

Poor Asher =( Very good chappy!!! XD Can't wait for the next one ^_^

update soon

I can't believe that the jerk said that about Asher!! That is just so wrong!! Don't believe him Asher, don't believe him!! You're beautiful and wondrous and magnificent and splendastic...oops, hehe, got a bit carried away there. Anyway, this is is a wonderful chapter and I'm very happy that you updated. I can't wait to read more. Good luck and happy writing!!

Heh. I'm guessing that I'm that other reviewer that had been poking and prodding you with my utter "hatred" of Anita. Can't help it really. The first few books of ABVH I was all "Anita's cool" but when it progressed... Well.... You read it yourself and you'd start seeing how Anita's becoming so warp. I'm a sentimental person and I'm always in favor of the underdogs and besides that I love Harry. Really love this character so I'd choose him over Anita anyday. I guess I could just feel how it felt to be someone on the side. Yeah, Asher and Micah love him but their love is "not enough". And I would really just like to see this end where Harry will be happy. No hurt, no thinking that "I can't be selfish", no forcing yourself to think that "it's enough" cause it'll never will. I guess being in Harry's shoes once when it concerns his love life really affected me, so now I'm wanting to read something of an "happily ever after" in your fic when I didn't get mine. Real life's a bitch as my philosophy.

Points for you cause this tells you that you're an amazing writer. This fic made me cry, angry, ballistic, happy and so on... I guess I'll just hold on tightly to this fic and pray and maybe even beg you to give me, us, those readers who wants a "happily ever after" too.

I love it!! I can't wait for more!!!

Love the new chapter. Just as a thought. Have you maybe considered bringing another person into harry's love life.... another dominant, but one that isn't in love with anita, and would only be in love with harry and the other 2 eventually. So then harry would have someone when the others are off being buttheads? Serve them right!!!