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for Le Frère de Sang

by julesquires

person Jan
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, and dramatic chapter, I like the fact that Asher finally opened his bloody eyes. I'm tired of seeing Harry hurt because of the stupid things he's always doing.... and others as well. I can't wait to see what Micah thinks of Harry's plans/ideas T_T

Please update chapter 30 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Loved this chapter. Though i feel a bit bad for Harry. Anita gets top banana and hes stuck playing second fiddle. I still loved the chapter. Keep up the good work.
person alma
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person alma
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Erin2468
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O hot chapter!

I feel so sad for Asher though :(

Love this story XD
person Elfin69
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is absolutely fabulous. I love the interaction between Harry, Micah and Asher and thought that the last chapter with them first teasing each other and then doing everything else was terrific. I wonder if Asher was able to feel what the two were up to while he was with Jean-Claude and if it affected him also.

Keep up the great writing and I will review as much as possible.
person GemJewel
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this fic!! Love it! will Harry receive a bj now that he gave one? does he still think that they are disgusting? please update more soon!
person Jan
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll have to say a steaming hot red, would be the color I'd put for his chapter!
Ahh, is there a way for Harry to lose his virginity on the next chapter? *looks up at jules with big hopeful puppy eyes*

Please update chapter 28 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't review that much, but I really do like your story and felt you deserved more then just 4 reviews like the last chapter...=^.^=... So here's my review contribution in all its unassuming glory =) Hope you keep up all the good work and the chapters keep a coming (pun intended)...**snicker**
person hiyayaka
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story
but it gets posted so slowly