rate_review Reviews

Poor Harry. I cried when I read where Blaise had died. This story is so well written that I really got into it and lost track of time. You have a great beginning and I hope that you continue this fic. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

I am beyond glad I found this story. It is amazingly well written, I actually teared up a bit(although PMS was a contributing factor) when Blaise died. I can't wait to read more, please update as soon as possible.

interesting fic, can't wait to see more!

Wow! Just wow! I am only now getting over crying with Harry over the murder and then the memories of Blaize. I don't normally care about the characters too much but this really caught me off guard.
I say again, wow.
Your writing is really well done. I appreciate not having to translate every little misspelled word or incorrectly structured sentence. (And if it bothers me, then it is bad.)
Your story is, so far, delightful! Please continue and let us know when you update!
Thank you so much for joining and gifting us with your talent.

I love it! This has been awesome so far! I can't wait for more!!

Ok, you've got my interest. Please update again soon!

I love this story.

Constructive Criticism:
Chpt 4: Federal Marshal, not field marshal

oh wow this is so awesome. i am really enjoying it. i was sitting here crying my eyes out when blaise died, and now i am tearing up at the thought of it. i cant wait to read more and hopefully soon.

this is really good i can't wiat too see what happens and i am really surprised that you have so much up in such a short amount of time please keep it up cause this story sound really good so far.