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for Le Frère de Sang

by julesquires

schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh fantastic new chapter. Very steamy. Can't wait to see more~
person alma
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! This rocks!!! More please!! So are you implying that blaise manipulated harry into tink oral sex is bad?
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! This rocks!!! More please!! So are you implying that blaise manipulated harry into tink oral sex is bad?
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Asher and Micah stop seeing Anita like that. Harry deserves to have them to himself. Anita has more than enough people she doesn't need those two too. :) That's just me though, I don't hate Anita, but I don't like her either.

Anyway i really like your story and I just read it in one sitting. I hope to see more soon. Keep up the good work. :)
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
rollercoaster thy name is Harry. Poor kid. He just can't stay in one residence.

In relation to the marks, I think Harry should wait on the 4th mark (the one that makes him stop aging) until he's at least 21. Personally it would suck to get carded in bars for eternity.
He's only 17 (barely) and doesn't look it.
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! i can't wait for more!! this is soo good!
person BRATZ4
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
IVE BEEN WITH YOUR STORY STEP BY STEP AND I LOVE IT!!!
person alma
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far. You may want to consider posting this to Pommedesang . com You would get more reviews.