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by Kimberly1983

person smmz79
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty cool just thinking harrys name and he made it to his house... hot make up sex... great chap....
person smmz79
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG well written i am not sure that i have yet to read a story that took this route with that particular room generally others have had the malfoys apologetic or the room changed i like this chap and the fact that hermione stood up to them i can not believe that they would do that but of course they have such strong ideas on what draco should be and do... i hope he is able to fix this with hermione....
person kittycat30
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good for Hermione! Draco was a bit disappointing though... he just sat there & let them attack her. I know she's strong & handled herself well, but she should not forgive him too easily! Love the story!
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing a couple of Malfoys that aren't all together likable yet. They didn't read as completely evil, just manipulative, like they were testing her and I actually liked that. They wanted to see what she was made of, and boy did they. lol I know/hope they will eventually come around, but for now I hope she gets to somehow hex either one of them at least a little first. *insert evil laugh here* Good for her for not taking it anymore and leaving with her dignity intact. And, I am proud of Draco's parting shot, too. Now, I hope he can make Hermione feel better. Looking forward to your next update. Thanks!! HG4eva
person KellyJCR
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That chapter could have been named smack down at Malfoy Mansion. Hermiones little speech was priceless. Well done!!!
person kazfeist
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I look forward to seeing how you write the elder Malfoys' reaction to Hermione. :D
person smmz79
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow great chap... hmm i wonder what his parents are going to be like the letter seemed awful polite!!!! great job
person KellyJCR
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow quite a shock they should have been more careful. I hope his parents throw a litlle drama at them after all it wouldn't be very Malfoyesque if they didn't. Well done!
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved that chapter xxx cannot wait to see the meeting....another chapter before the end of the day please?? 10/10
person KellyJCR
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a happy new year!! I am liking the fact that everyone has come around to the relationship. As for my votes for choices they should live together if they don't have kids. If they do then I think they sould get married. I know I sound old fashioned but that is just the way I was brought up. Still loving your story. Looking forward to more. Well done.