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UHhhhhh.. it really IS a conspiracy!!! But not the way one would've thought it to be... clever, clever, you surprise me at every turn and once again. It's great how Harry's emotions and reactions swirl along with the revelations he gets, I very much love his character right now!!!
All yours darling, go play some more!!
Cat

Getting very interesting! :D There are just so many candidates for people who might have dug up the stone (on purpose, if it was), so I'm interested to see who will be taking that role. I'm certain that this pent up agression you are building up in Harry will have to go somewhere, other than to bed with Malfoy of course. lol I really liked the "emotions" as described in this chapter. Nice job.

this fic sounds interesting. :-)
Hope you update more soon.

The troublestone that triggers genocide against minorities is a great idea...
harry and draco's interaction was believable, well-written. Good Job :)

Amazing plot! I can't get enough, please more!

Eheheh, Harry's reactions to Draco are sooooo sweet! He's cute when he's confused about his feelings. I've a question about the stone: you said the people infected fulfilled the principles of a leader, but things as the registration of werewolves and spells put on the bloodlines are not Harry's principles, am I wrong? I think I don't understand it very well. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you'll update soon.

I'm so glad you came back to AFF! This is an interesting story so far, and I can't help but see the opposite nature of it to the Frame of Mind Series. It is funny how you flip the characters around Harry only for Harry to follow the same pattern of bitterness with a lonesome nature. Hm...The Order of Dragon, huh? :D Nice touch. lol I liked that last scene in Chapter 2 in particular with the scars. That was very well written. Nice job so far!

EMAHAHaha.. I didn't even realize I was the first, so FIRST (*g* I know it's silly, but well..) ok, now we have even more an outline on what horrendous things big-wizard-brother is up to. Well, it's still once again your intricate, original yet authentically similar portrayal of the characters and their emotions, that get to me. You develop the same characters always along the line of different settings that makes the hteir own person and yet traceable back to one origin. I always marvel at that. Can't wait for the rebellion to start in earnest!!
Cat

(Chapter 1)


Nice start. Curious to see where this leads. Looking forward to the next update.

Great begining, so much tension already, I believe this will be a great story! Are you going to show draco's point of view too or just harry's?