rate_review Reviews

Another great Story. I love the intensity of the last chapter.

Sooo need chapter 6!!! What will they do now?

the perfect balance of a chapter; 2/3 of action/adventure/suspense and 1/3 of...loving? heh, that's just me and my opinion, but the loving part after a near-death situation (at least for Draco, since Harry's life is insured by the stone), is so my cup of coffee. the relief of surviving and the desperation to convince oneself of it....for Draco, to find himself not all alone anymore, that there's someone who not just fighting WITH him, but FOR him, i can't imagine how he's feeling during the course of the battle. thank you, author.

great chapter!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Holy.. that was bloody HOT... so violent and intense and fast... struck you like lightning and dragged you along back up into the sky!!
I mean first that battle and then the aftermath.. now wonder Draco got turned on reaaaal bad *g*
keep that up to the end!! Can't wait for more
Cat

Sooo need chapter 5!!!

There is definitely some part of me that always falls for the whole Harry and Draco against/saving the world, alone together.

I'm excited to see where this one is going :)

about #4...

O-o-okayyy, what stands out the MOST to me is....Draco seems two nuts shy of a
full basket. I don't really want to know what happened, but it seems his mind
went around the bend a few times.

Oh dear... that's going to be a real blast ehehehe, wonder how they'll react to Harry doing the Rambo-man for a Death Eater... MEAHehehehee, and well, let's see how he gets out of it.. but crashing the fountain? very nice!!
Cat

AH! :( You had to end it there, huh? :( I was starting to get excited to see the plot move and then... lol anyways. I liked the reverse touching of Harry's scars. That was quite beautiful, and a much nicer feel than even the fabulous scene before with Harry touching Malfoy's scars. I hadn't thought that Harry would take that wish to have more scars to this extreme, but oh well. Was it really all Harry's fault though? With the power of the troublestone, I'm not sure if it could have broken the connection. I would have liked that better, especially since I would have thought Draco would have told Harry of the reprecussions of Harry getting hurt, since he knows how foolhardy Griffindors could be. Not that I can really blame him for forgetting. Do you plan on going over exactly how Draco analyzed the protections around the Troublestone and how he decided that he forgot something only after arrive at the Ministry? I like the description of the spell though. I can't wait for the next chapter though. Literally, I mean you end it right when Harry goes for the worst person possible to shoot a curse at, the Minister. Awesomeness.