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hey! you gave a clear hint with the 'Dragon' in the Order's name early in the story, but somehow i was still shocked with them appearing now. i just didn't see that coming. wonderful, as ever. thank you!

Mehehehehe... I've waited for the Order of the Dragon to make an appearance.. not exactly a surprise there.. only one man would've had enough power and determination to form that one apart from Harry (in his earlier days of course..) Well, I think now we've got everything needed for a good flashy finale!! Bring it on!
Cat

It isn't so much that I completely forgot the "Order of the Dragon" existed, I just figured that the number was so few that we wouldn't be meeting them, but this is interesting. I'm a bit wary as to whether this ritual will actually turn real at some point (real death with the dagger), seeing as all of the information of the Troublestone comes directly from Draco, and he could, techically lie at will. As for the shattering of the stone, there is one clause I'm wondering. Say this ritual is completed and everyone believes Harry to be dead, and the stone shatters, how possible is it for Harry to return back to his life? I mean, just because everyone believes him to be dead, doesn't mean that, from their perspective he couldn't have faked it once he returns. That would have been different if his entire life disappeared from their memory, but...I hope that makes sense. I'm just curious as to how many ways this can turn out from here. I'm not sure I like that Draco is introducing him to his Order only after they go into the ministry, seemingly without anything to trick the wards. On another note, I rather liked Draco's response in two particular spots: one when Harry asks Draco why he is so "cheerful" and the other when Harry calls him a hero. Respectively, those were two wickedly intense and sweet scenes. I can't believe you churned this chapter out though, not 24 hours after that other LONG oneshot. Especially since this seems to be the longest chapter of Secondhand Heroes. :) Glad you did. I really am enjoying this story. I find it hard to key on to Draco's feelings for Harry, since he chooses surprising moments to be affectionate when the old Draco might have been angry or irritated (although he finally showed a bit of exasperation). To be sure, this isn't quite the obsessive needy nature of the Draco in "Forgive those who Trespass", but at the same time not entirely sane of mind either, but sane enough to realize that he is under "delusions" and such. Wonderful job.

Okaaaay, even though I'm a total Draco fan, the first person I'd be running from would be Draco. He's really creepy, not even in a fun way. Why can't Harry do this on his own...after escaping Draco.

Oh dear. I'm chuckling nervously here with that consequences commment. Hmm, another question. Malfoy said this was a solution, to sort of oblivate Harry's continued life from everyone's mind but he didn't mention what happens to the stone. Does it become a rock devoid of power and thought? I'm guessing that it does not teleport anywhere, and for some reason it isn't like Harry's physical death, but does it immediately crack and break or something? I'm not sure I liked the comment where Draco seemed so sure that Harry was something he could have, as opposed to someone else being the charisma focus, but I thought it was rather amusing how Harry didn't think of Draco to be with, but rather thought of muggles and Death eaters first. :) Back to the idea of the troublestone, I wasn't sure about it before, but I am defintely finding it to be a much more interesting "character" in the story. The idea that something like that could have explained something akin to Hitler and the Nazi part or the like is rather interesting in it's own way. Even if it can't be realistically sound in our world. And back to my "peaceful" comment. I'm not sure exactly how to explain it, but despite the passion that is present during those scenes, unlike your other stories, I dunno. It seems almost one of those "slow motion" fuzzy (but not too fluffy) scenes that there is just an utter peace to be found in their relationship in this story. This ultimately is formed from scenes like the touching of scars and Draco's tilted mind but... it is rather to pleasant to read something of their affirmation of life in the past chapter, when something of that nature (life) is what they are fighting for. I suppose that is what I meant. It was rather cruel ;) that Harry thinks he can leave Draco after becoming a rock for him in the days to come, so I'm glad Harry is getting a bit of a wake up call. It is weird that Harry isn't approaching the solution as something he can choose. He can certainly choose to escape to the muggle world without Draco, so I'm surprised he never thought of it. I find that death might have been kinder than having everyone forget that you are still alive, but having to go on living. Harry certainly can't save the world anymore after this case is done if he does have to exit stage left. But the question of these consequences are killing me! I look forward to seeing those and the next chapter. Wonderful job. I'm enjoying this story so very much.

woah! i love revelations! as usual, enjoyed the new chapter, so thank you.

draco is like a spider and harry can't get away from him. This is the mental picture I got of this chapter. Great fun.
keep it up!

Aha.. we really should have known.. is there ANY way to save the world without Harry dying some way or another? *g* It's an interesting concept nonetheless even if Draco's a bit mad but well, aren't we all a bit haywire?? They'll manage!
Cat

I really, really love this Draco, so passionate and strong, even after the tortures and his imprisonement. He's a perfect match for Harry, 'cause behind the saviour, the hero, he's a little boy, insicure and scared to be left alone. But I think Draco's plan could be a great opportunity for Harry. No more pressures, no more 'savior of the world' things that people have always expected from him. Obviously...IF Draco's plan is going to work! What a pity we're near the end of the story, I would have liked it a little bit longer (ok...much more longer!)

Funny you should mention "action" so shortly after THAT scene. lol But I must say, this is probably my favorite moment of the two beings lovers, out of all the other sex scenes you written. This was peaceful as much as it was passionate, and almost appropriate and perfect timing to introduce it even though I'm sure I don't understand everything, as we don't get a look into Draco's thoughts in this story. As for the other "action", that scene was amazing! I loved the idea of "Expelliarmus plurimus"; that was wicked. As a curiousity, if Harry were to die, would the stone lose its effects? Or would it hold Harry as a martyr or something? You mentioned before that the stone wouldn't want Harry to die, but I was just curious as to whether Harry's death is an option for resolution. And if Harry survives, I really hope he didn't kill anyone. I can't imagine what the blasting curse that hit Kingsley dead on must have done to him. And you mention consequences, but even if Harry is succumbing to a bit of selfishness in his want for scars and fighting, that he doesn't have to go to jail, or die for that matter. Wonderful chapter. I really am enjoying this story.