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for Disguised Affections

by Dressagegrrrl

person Kimmyle
schedule August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just finished reading your story and wanted to thank you for writting and posting it. I had a lot of fun reading it and enjoyed myself greatly. It was clearly thought out and an interesting idea to write a story about. Thank you for writing it.
person Trelweny
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story was absolutely wonderful -except for the part about Ginny dying although I did appreciate how her death brought Draco, Harry, and Ron somewhat together.

While it's probably years too late for the vote, I'd love to see Draco paired with Luna or a muggleborn two or more years younger.

Thanks so much for writing.
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY! Forgive me for not reviewing all along the way, but, I was so caught up in the story! I loved it! I couldn't stop reading it long enough to review each chapter. The relationships. The snarkiness. I had a shiver at the torture memory, I don't know whether to say "ewww" or to compliment you on a really well done piece of writing that skirted the edge of almost being to much for me.
But, I truly enjoyed Sev having a second chance, and his relationships with everyone. Loved it!!!!
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is becoming an interesting story. You write well. Where ever did you encounter a beobab?
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So let me get this straight Ginny WAS raped and killed but Hermione WASN'T raped the ether times when she was at the Malfoy mansion manner etc?? (Who did Hermione lose her virginity to then? You never said who she lost her virginity to and it wasn
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok first off this isnt lycan this is her gf. i have to say i was totally engrossed in this story from beginning to end. love your style of writing and the story was amazing too. all to often u either find a story which is written really well but has no plot or a story with a great concept but the writing is horrible. i would like to say thank you for this story has sparked some ideas in me but dont worry i wont be stealing any of it just exploring some bits you left open for me.

keep writing, i shall be checking for new stories regularly.
sarah
xxx
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, you really made my Friday night! I have read this story non-stop all night! It was so pretty and original! I enjoyed it a lot. Funny, usually I like Lucius Malfoy, but in this story I hated him! What a maniac! Good thing Severus killed him. And I'm so glad you didn't write about their marriage and children and things like that... I hate those endings. Your ending was just perfect! Open and still happy. I hope you write something more! Hopefully Hermione/Severus?
Thank you for making a poor cold-sick girl feel a little better!
Miya
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person smmz79
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my what a great story i loved the whole thing and the thought that you put into each detail... like the cuffs and how they had the wearer holding 5 years of severus' life or the fact that dumbledore used hermione as a tool to make serverus kill lucius by allowing the relationship between con and hermione to continue... i loved dracos role in this and how you paralleled him and severus like when severus played decoy for harry and draco played decoy for severus.... i just love the relationship you have going between ron, harry and draco and i laugh every time that i read them all together... like when they were on the quidditch pitch and draco was like ok i am done with you... i loved it he is sooo funny in this and i love severus and hermiones relationship.... you write some steamy scenes between them as well.... i loved when hermione refused to shake dumbledores hand that was good and the chewing that severus gave minerva and dumbledore.... great job... so have you thought of a sequel you know just to let us know where our favorite people are... did draco stay close with harry, ron, and hermione... how are hermione and severus doing??? you know all of those things... well great job i loved it!!!!!!!!
person neelix
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cried.

Perfect, perfect..... *sigh*. I'm missing them already.

Thank you so much for writing this.