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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy smokes! Draco, you just had to go and make things worse, didn't you? I loved the confrontation, especially Ron's "I could never hate you line." Poor boy.
I'm a little worried that Draco's mind keeps going by to the advantages of turning Hermione over to Voldemort. I know he would never do it, but he keeps going back to those dark thoughts, especially calling staying with her is the "wrong decision". I'm fairly certain that he won't do it now that he's sent that letter, but I guess a some suspense is good.
I'm a little worried that Draco's mind keeps going by to the advantages of turning Hermione over to Voldemort. I know he would never do it, but he keeps going back to those dark thoughts, especially calling staying with her is the "wrong decision". I'm fairly certain that he won't do it now that he's sent that letter, but I guess a some suspense is good.
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the showdown and thanks for not making Ron go ballistic. Makes his character more complex and believable when authors don't have him be a Pavlovian dog about Draco. One tiny grammar comment: I think you meant 'effect' back where you used 'affect'. Both are correctly spelled, so SpellChek wouldn't have caught it. Can't wait for what's next. Hope Draco will continue to do what's right by Hermione, but I guess I'll have to wait and see. :D
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and the plot thickens!!!! (*insert evil laughter*) well the shit has hit the fan as we all knew it would so what now???? lol another GREAT chapter but then again all of yours are :D can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work u know how much I love this story <3<3
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco really can put his foot in his mouth sometimes!! haha
I hope Hermione and Ron can work things out, and that he eventually accepts her and Draco.
and I especially hope that Draco lets go of his death eater ways and stops even thinking that he could hand Hermione over!
I hope you update again soon!!
xoxo
I hope Hermione and Ron can work things out, and that he eventually accepts her and Draco.
and I especially hope that Draco lets go of his death eater ways and stops even thinking that he could hand Hermione over!
I hope you update again soon!!
xoxo
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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful. haha. i loved the end im dying to know what happens next! please try to update soon! :))
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good good good chapter!!!
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the update....I forget if you're going to have a Death Eater battle in this story, or will they just go on until the end of school with not outside world creeping in? :D
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear. Hermione needs to decide what she really wants, I think. Ron is way overreacting, but I'm glad that Ginny is talking sense. Why should she give up Draco for Ron? I know which I'd choose xD Although I do think he is a little too good at lying. Hermione needs to learn to read him better :P look forward to the next chapter!
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So...yeah. Been meaning to review this story for ages, but real life seems to get in the way. Especially when you have a six month old! Love, love LOVE the angst between Hermione and Draco...SO ready for the next chapter! Update again soon, please? I'll give you a life size chocolate chip cookie shaped like Draco!!!
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked Draco's last line - the whole difference between saying and feeling. Can't wait for the next update.