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for Lessons and Obsessions

by LennaNightrunner

person Anon
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! I loved Hermione's use of Ron, Harry and Ginny in her fantasies to help her get off and yet it was only Draco who really pushed her over the edge. He's definitely on her mind now, just the way he played it - sneaky little Slytherin. LOL And he knew she was getting herself off over him too, loved when Hermione realised that. I also love that she couldn't help herself but to meet him at the History of Magic classroom and that he had an answer for each one of her protests that became more feeble as she went on. I get what you mean too, I love how she's at a loss for why she's even contemplating being with Draco. Can't wait for more. :)
person kazfeist
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wanted to read both chapters before reviewing. You've laid a reasonable basis in the plot for Draco's actions. Hopefully, you'll explain why Hermione's not aware of his protection by the Order in later chapters, and I can see that while Draco thinks this is just about the sex, he'll soon get ensnared in the emotions, too. :D
person Coipje
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope so I was all giddy when i readed the second chapter (sorry for my bad english)
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hotnessssss! Draco's confidence, his aura is just fire! And naughty little Hermione with thoughts of Ginny, Harry, and Ron! Whooo! You go girl! You've got quite the story here, and i'm in for as long as you are!! You could be edging your way to a Smutastic Award nomination missy! Come and check it out! Smutastic Awards: We get down to the good parts! http://community.livejournal.com/smutastic_award/
person ilke
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know this was last chapter, but I just saw it again, and I can't stop chuckling.
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i love you and this story!
person Cascada
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome, please continue
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do continue. I absolutely LOVE it.
person Coipje
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am all tingly :D
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Gotta love a man with a plan! I have a feeling that Draco needn't think Hermione will always be so compliant. It's one thing to catch her off guard after all, next time she will be ready for him. LOL