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aah I like it's a sentemental chapter in a good way

Intense! This chapter was beautifully written and intense! One of the best "kissing of the Dark Mark scenes I have ever read! Bravo!

This is an absolutely wonderful story! Please please please update!

Holy fuck that was hot! And you're going to laugh when you read my next chapter! Or it might be the one after. lol! Nice work girlie! That was really excellent (and did I mention hot?) *smirk*

I just found your story and I am already getting addicted! Really interesting characters and a fun storyline. I think your killing me and Hermione with the slowly evolving involvement of Draco, but hopefully we can both wait. I liked the House colors rule that Draco brought out at the end, nice touch in a number of ways. Looking forward to the next installment.

Girrrrrrrllll, your Malfoy is all kinds of incredible! The way he controlled the "lesson" His "exasperation", before he finally makes HER get herself off, him calling her the "M-word", and the manner in which he did it was so hot! Funny, I usually cringe when fics use it, cuz it reminds me of JKR' Draco, but here, super hot! You're keeping them deliciously in character, kudos!

I felt a bit uncomfortable reading the fifth chapter....I can see Draco being more and more cruel to her. That could break her, and I really hate reading stories where her will is broken. Hopefully, he'll cave in to his emotions before then. It should be a dynamic, wherein she becomes empowered by her new knowledge, and he realizes he's given her that power, which, in turn, liberates her from him, too. The knowledge that the object of your affections (which, for Hermione, are already there, and she'll realize it first), knows how you feel and doesn't return those feelings is numbingly painful. Having felt that in the past, I don't wish that on anyone...including fictional characters. I guess I get too invested in them. Keep up the good work, though! :D

That's what I'm for
I must say on this chapter you got me
My boyfriend was very happy if you know what I mean :P
good job

Good to know Draco is going to play more of an active role although it is quite fun having Hermione obey his commands for the time being. It's almost like the lull before the storm. And I can't wait for that particular tempest to unfold. :)

Ok, I love your story... The last chapter was sooo good. I wanted to be Hermione soooo much! Way to go,and please, update as soon as you can!!