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What else can I say besides that was hot - damn hot!! :)

Hi Lenna! That was lovely! Your mind is delightfully dirty - just like someone else's I know. I'm impressed with how instructive Draco is. Who needs a book when you have a Draco? Yum!

Draco's control is a-ma-zing! Love how he hinted at oral, but didn't even get close, using his hand instead, yeah buddy! The oral scene was fab! Hotness personified! His directions, calling her darlin' his post orgasm instructions, that was hot as hell, no lie! I was cracking up when she pulled him through the boxer hole! LMAO! Innocent little Granger! The thought she had about his previous experience was dead on, but Damned if she cared, hell, who would? Another yummy chapter girly, bravo!

Finally all caught up, and damn, I want more! LOL! Truly, though, this is fantastic, I really, really liked it. I love how you write both of them, you have captured them both so well, and their chemistry and sexual tension is just explosive. There's so many things I liked about it, the way he called her mudblood and it nearly got her off, her kissing his Dark Mark, and that blow job, not to mention the way he returned the favor. Hot, hot hot! Some really great smut here, and I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Well, a very good chapter, in my opinion. The dynamic we discussed is starting to emerge. I can't wait to see Draco, hoist on his own petard. I know Hermione will be a kind and gracious Mistress. ;)

Oh my my this thing is getting so much more hotter and more complicated, I stil am very wary and suspicious of this draco but he is being the evil git I know he, albeit a hot one. Great writing agian and thanks for the quick back to back chapters, it was good to read one after the other.

Chapter 5
I couldn't believe how fast and simply she submitted to him, and is he just going to leave her randy like that all the time, I know its a learning process, but he is being such a prat about it, and we all know he really wants her. I wanted her to fight him back a little make him lose control facade, not fight him back all the time mind u just not make it easy for him. I am sorry I have a huge issue with submitting easily, or at all, control is my survival, but I DO understand the subject and do like to read about it, but that doesn't mean my blood doesnt boil heavily at some points...lol.

Chapter 6
well now that was a rather interesting chapter, they actually talked alot about some important topics, and we finanly see draco's emotions slipping, finanlly, I love to see him break, especially the self righteous character ones. But he does have alot of control over her, and maybe it is what she needs, heck its better than Ron any day of the weak, but I hope he doesn't hurt her physically or break her emotionally, like your other reviewers asked. Oh and I hope ginny doesn't start to get nosy, and unbearably so. And OMG the part where her interaction with his scarred Dark mark forearm, I wanted to die, it was so sweet, innocent and erotic all at the same time, I know draco wanted to die, the poor bugger couldnt even process all his emotions fast enough, and they had more than one break throughs with their talk. It was a good meeting for them, I loved it.

Please keep up the good work and keep the chapters of greatness coming.

She kissed his arm as if she could make the Mark disappear by the sheer power of her acceptance of him.

Well now. That's Hermione Granger for you isn't it. The idealist. Really loved that line. Love how she flipped things on Draco here. The discussion and narration on old voldie was telling and interesting. And she is becoming aware of her attachment to him too. That should be interesting to read about. I sense inner conflict! lol! Great work lady!

Gah! This chapter was so adorable. I like the way you described Draco's thoughts... it suited him very well. They were so cute toghether, and when she kissed his Dark Mark, I thought I was going to melt. I'm a sucker for romance and love, but I can't wait to see some smut! I'm literaly on pins and needles, and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep writing this woderful story...

Chapter five was definately hot! I loved the sheer power Draco has over Hermoine just with words! And chapter six was written well also; it is refreshing to see the characters developed a bit more before the naughtiness ensues. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hermione said "Incarcerus" - to lock away - at the letter. I think you may have meant "Inflammare" - to burn. Just a thought.