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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm quite curious about Draco. I know he seems interested in Hermione, but it seems more of a conquest type of level. I wonder if he is going to fall in love with her or if he is just going to break her emotionally. I also love the fact that he is dark and posessive. He's not as dark as he could be, but even when he is being affectionate he has that darkness about him. Great chapter. ;D
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Even if that meant putting her head in the tiger
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello *waves*! The chapter - great as usual. Don't worry, just because there isn't any smut doesn't mean we won't like it much. I love everything that you write. Anyway, I love the fact that Hermione tried to resist him, but couldn't (I mean, who could?). I felt sorry for Draco, cause I got the impression that he is very lonely... poor baby. Anyway, as I said, great chapter and I really can't wait to read the smut that will come in the next one! They're gonna have sex! Yay! Make it good... we're counting on you... Muah!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for Chapter 7, and I can see the minute changes in Draco, as well as Hermione. I'm glad he wasn't as cruel in this chapter. Wish he'd Reparo'ed the undies, though. ;)
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, OMG, OMG *clears throat* firstly I feel honoured that u replied with such a monster paragraph, I was thrilled my review was appreciated and I love u tooo, oh and I am glad u r not gonna let draco hurt hermione, and that things will get better and interesting soon, and hermione will get confidence. the mark scene was priceless, and it was everything, but I read a fanfic with hermione doing something similar to draco and it was in a whole other context and when I find it back I will let u know, as I read that u never read that reaction somewhere else before, so I will let u know, although your instance and the other instance were 2 totally different circumstance, yours will remain permanently ingrained in my mind. I am glad I insighted such a response and I was so excited to read it, and it answered all my burning questions. And as for this chapter....well...passes out on floor....OMG she got and gave alot of firsts, and somehow like he give her orders in this chapter, he isnt rough but demanding, and she let him break lose on the blowjob, I was shocked senseless for that part though, but squealed when he intended on making it up to her. It just left me hungry for more, and breathless. UPDATE lenna
Respect
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Respect
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good loved this chapter too
I am official in love with this story ;)
I am official in love with this story ;)
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's wildflower4evr from LJ! *waves*
How in the hell did I let this story slip past me? LoL! What you have so far is fantastic! You're building up to the BIG moment in quite a delicious way!
I love how you've written both Draco and Hermione. He may have switched sides but he's as cocky as ever. Also as bossy as can be! Hermione, someone we would normally view as strong, I think is reacting appropriately to the situation. Usually the know-it-all, she has to deal with a subject she knows little to nothing about. Lovely to see her as a true "student" for once.
Can't wait to read more of this one. :)
How in the hell did I let this story slip past me? LoL! What you have so far is fantastic! You're building up to the BIG moment in quite a delicious way!
I love how you've written both Draco and Hermione. He may have switched sides but he's as cocky as ever. Also as bossy as can be! Hermione, someone we would normally view as strong, I think is reacting appropriately to the situation. Usually the know-it-all, she has to deal with a subject she knows little to nothing about. Lovely to see her as a true "student" for once.
Can't wait to read more of this one. :)
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was hot! I love this and I cannot wait for the conflict and drama to unfold, because of course in a story as great as this... there always has to be drama and conflict of epic proportions! Fabulous!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this chapter wasn't hot... it was HOT! Oh, your Draco is always welcome to give me the lessons about sex, lol - I wouldn't mind... Smut scene = perfect. I loved it, really and can't wait to read more... Oh, and I have a little wish... Since, you're now one of my favorite authors on aff (and I really mean that) could you write the next smut scene, with Draco in his dominating role. I just love when he's in control, talks dirty (and I'm sure I'm not the only one...cough*Hermione*cough...). So, I hope you'll think about it, and just so you know, I respect the fact that you manage to answer to all of your reviews. You rock, girl...
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not sure if I have reviewed or not...sometimes I think I have because I sort of get this running commentary in my head when I am reading but then It turns out that I didnt....comes from being an overworked mother I think LOL too many things going on at one time in one poor head. Anyhow, I really like the story. I always wonder about the room of requirement though. Say Draco and Mione are in there getting busy but another couple....for the sake of originality lets say Neville and Luna....want some alone time too, when they enter do they see Mione and Draco doing the deed or does it shield other users? I know...has nothing to do with the story but it goes through my mind anyhow....my poor brain. Anyhoo...I like it...I also like that you have Draco NOT messing with the other whores in the school anymore....I like faithful men....I have a hard time reading fics where Draco cheats on her or sleeps around, drives me batty. Well this review got away from me didnt it?
Suffice it to say I am enjoying it and will continue to read it LOL
Happy Writing
SG
Suffice it to say I am enjoying it and will continue to read it LOL
Happy Writing
SG