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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Girl, chapter 9 was the shiz! Draco so slow, and methodical, lacing caring thoughts about Hermione with snarky ones! That boy will not let you forget that he is Draco-motherfucking-Malfoy! Just perfection all around! Damn, that chapter left me breathless! I can't even be mad that you didn't expand on their dual oral lesson, cuz the little you did tell had my mouth dropping open! Oh, and her little oral lesson from the other chapter came in quite handy at my house! TMI! great job lovely, just faboo!
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was actually quite beautiful given Draco's semi detached emotions. Though It is obvious his attachment is beginning to develop as is hers. A woman never forgets her first, thats an amazing truth isnt it? Its good that he recognized that and shoved his own needs to the side to make it special for her, even if he was partially motivated by the hope that she would let him have at her again =).
Fantastic work, dearie! Cant wait to read more!
Happy Writing!
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Fantastic work, dearie! Cant wait to read more!
Happy Writing!
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done! And, I think you're the first author I've read who accurately portrayed Hermione's coital and post-coital feelings. It's fairly unusual for a girl to climax the first time....and yet almost all the fics out there have it happening. Thanks for that! :D
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so when are people going to find out lol I know it has to be coming.
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done Lenna! I LOVE that they are going to just fall asleep. The morning after should be interesting to say the least. Can't wait! Keep up the great work!
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am always here Love
looking for fics and I love chapter 8 too :D
looking for fics and I love chapter 8 too :D
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter too :D your truly amazing Love
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter, my dear. I'm actually surprised that Draco managed to keep his cool fascade going all the way through. I guess he's a bit stronger than I gave him credit for. Hermione on the other hand, oh that girl is falling in love. I almost pity her, but such is the mechanics of it all, very hard not to fall in love to the one you give yourself to. I did love how he decided he was too tired to leave her and too tired to push her away and he'd give her just a few more moments to bask in his wake. LOL I also liked that although she enjoyed her first time, it was good but not earth shattering, it leaves the promise of something better to come. SO bring on my something!!! LMAO Seriously though, well done!!
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see even more of the dynamic happening. Can't wait for the Big Night. :D
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No, thank you for providing such a delish story to read. :) And there's nothing wrong with a little plot and character building amongst the more er hornier details. LOL I always find it funny that Ron, considering that he is so stratetically clever, can be so oblivious to what goes on around him. Maybe one day he'll learn. LOL Either that or Ginny got his share. As for the next lesson, I can't help wondering whom is going to get the bigger surprise once the next lesson is said and done. *grins*