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for Lessons and Obsessions

by LennaNightrunner

schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chap 11: We finally see draco's side of his feelings and emotions, and i pleased to see he was frazzled and wanting her badly, the horny dog! and I am glad to see the kidnappings have increased, I laughed when she wasn't even fazed by it, and I glad she was secretly pleased...lol. But she has a fear of when he is gonna give her up, and she may be in love with him, I was suprised she actually gave in to it so fast but atleast she thought it awwwwwwww I felt for her. The smut was hot, very delectable, had my heart racing, draco was wickedly fufilling, but hermione stole the show:
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chap 12: SMUT, DELICIOUS, NAUGHTY SMUT, I am such a randy female...sigh shakes head. NO SILENCING CHARM, and he spanked her oh that one was blisteringly bad boy of him. I was also glad that two of them were so randy that couldn't wait one more day to have each other, and him coming to her window wet was so sweet, so chevalier, and so smug all rolled into one. I loved the statement: And now he would have her in her own bedroom, right under the noses of every single Gryffindor who would never believe that their sweet little bookworm would succumb to the advances of Draco Malfoy: Pureblood, Slytherin, Death Eater. And there would be no magic to keep them from hearing if she couldn
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God your Draco is just FIRE! The torture of her, the descriptions of the cold of his skin, and "roll over", has me dying! Ugh! Girly, you are just too good!
person ilke
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was a particularly painful cliffhanger!!! You evil woman! I imagine though that Draco has a bit more in store for her this evening. Oy! I can't wait! I love that you have him breaking his rules. What a great way to show that he is afftected! Woot! Wonderful chapter my dear! :)
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First up, yay that you updated and second, no worries about the deletion. :) As long as you got to read my vote of appreciation, it's all good. :) And last but not least, damn that was hot and what a teasing bastard Draco is but, and of course this just my opinion, I think he's teasing himself just as much, if not more and the moment Hermione realises that - oh he's gone, baby, gone. LOL Another brilliantly delish chapter. Ish very happy. :)
person kazfeist
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, she's finally admitted her feelings. Now, let's work on him. I think it's not going to be long. I mean, he couldn't even wait a week. Something will happen, my guess is that Ron will do something, and he'll just crack. :D
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dfnarghoesl'a?ghn[qatgrioghnldx vnx1! And that ends all coherent thought!
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so HOT!!! But the cliffy is a killer! I can't wait until chapter 13!
person crissm
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello!!! this is the first review a give u and i have to say i love ur fic!! is so good and i love the way u picture the caracters.
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schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? The last two chapters were great. Firstly, the way they develop feelings for each other is so adorable. I love their confusion and denial. Secondly, oh the smut scenes are perfect! I want to be Hermione so bad... Only for a day... I want Draco *pouts*! Anyway, I loved everything, hun and I really can't wait to see more...